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For chapter 3 and 4... I gotta say, its still great! and probably getting better too. I can't wait for more.
and from there… I was laughing so hard I ran out of breath for a bit… Raritys reaction was epic! Fluttershy's was expected.
...and more laughs ensured. That whole part was great and I enjoyed the tiny alicorn filly fragment. Her and Pinkie were very believable together. For a moment I dreaded that Pinkie would make immature commentes the way through Twilights confession, but no. It was wonderful just how you did it.
I don't think I've ever read a story quite like this. It doesn't take itself entierly seriously, the comedy is something I don't think I've seen before but it feels like a good epic story that I really want to keep reading. it's also great that its clear TwiLuna with no thrid party to ruin their fun in any way, shape or form. Playing in dreams is cool too. I might have to try that in one of my own stories. I look foward to seeing what Twilight wakes up to and what her first full day in Ponyville is like.
So far... i'd say this would be one of my fave TwiLuna stories.
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Wow - thanks for all the great feedback and compliments, FlutterDash7.
I'll do my best to keep it coming.
2494666 I agree entirely, submerged fainting couch, brilliant! Twilight's next day in Ponyville will be putting up with more of her figment rambling at her. Actually this works out great, Luna and Twilight can have a long distance relationship, but still spend time with eachother, and it's time that twilight can't really use for anything else productive. It's such a wonderful situation, the only issue is that Luna can't spend all Twilight's dream time with her cause she has to attend to other ponies dreams as well.
And now I have a boner and a mental image of Twilight and Luna kissing eagerly before Twi pushes Luna into a stream of chocolate while smiling happily.
More please?
Ooohhh, getting a little fetishy I see.
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Not too much so, I hope. I'm hoping that even if people are a little put off by the clop, they might still enjoy the story as a whole (and vice versa, for that matter).
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Twilight will be heading back to the factory later, but it'll be a much shorter visit. I have a rough plan to explore a few areas - having a dreamscape to play in gives Luna a lot of options, with far less consequences than real life, so it'd be a shame to not have a look around.
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Longer term (i.e. beyond the extents of this story), I see the relationship settling down to a couple of dream play dates a week (not always with sex, obviously) with the occasional face-to-face meetups when time and scheduling allows. Plus lots of letters.
In the story, it'll be a lot more intense, for plot and pacing reasons. Plus Luna has a dependency issue that she needs to work through (not sure if that's coming across, but it's what I'm going for).
That came intirely out of left field....... But I @&$?ing loved it!
This was awesome! I have no problem with the fetish stuff as long as it fits in like it did here.
"There's punch and cookies by the door!"
lol this is to funny but in all seriousness how the hell did your right 24 chapters of well lets just say interesting circumstances
What a coincidence. I was eating wonka spree while reading this.
What. The. BUCK did I just read?!
I mean, funny as hell, but seriously, I thought this was a TwiLuna clop, not Willie Wonka and the Mares' Sexual Harassment.
Still, funny; ONLY Twilight could cause the Toffee Revolt. This will be studied much by later historians...
W-800?
What is this, The Toffeenator?
*smack!*
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Good catch
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Second reads-through are always fun!