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good way too explain derpy's mark
derpy the dream walker. that is awesome. another fine chapter and as always i await more. i may never look at an Orange the same way again.
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Thanks guys. Derpy's cutie mark has bothered me for ages and this is the best explanation I could come up with.
As for Celestia joining in, while I like Twilunestia as much as the next guy, it really wouldn't have fit at this point in the story.
Ok, 3 things
""Oh my! Luna, it's full of toys!""
" ponies as beings rather than an array of multi-coloured toys.""
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You did not just make them say that...me and my perverted mind...
And the giant thermometer was from that one Ask Princess Molestia's am I right?
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This one.
Meh, not a fan of bondage, but that's the joy of multi-chapter clopfics. If one chapter doesn't have what you want, you always have more chapters to choose from.
That ending was beautiful. I also liked the 2001 reference.
2756441 I found this explanation to be a pretty good one myself.
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Thanks for the lovely comments
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I originally had "Oh my! Luna, it's full of balls!" before Knight of Cerebus pointed out that it could be misread. <sigh> You just can't win.
Must admit, I wasn't aware of the 'Ask Princess Molestia' tumblr. Looks pretty funny - I'll take a look.
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Sorry you didn't like that one. I must admit, most of what Twilight and Luna get up to in this story seems to involve bondage of one sort or another. If it helps, I'm working on a wet / soapy shower scene three chapters from now at the moment. (The next two chapters are written / reviewed and ready to post, so should be no problem in posting them next two Fridays).
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That's a great story - thanks for linking it. I do like that explanation, but I'm biased and prefer mine
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Me gusta.
Derpy/Ditzy is a dreamwalker. Headcanon Accepted. Truly. It's actually in my headcanon doc. Right underneath Celestia's gun. I forgot about that one, apparently it's made of 24 karat solidified awesome. I gotta re-read whatever story i pulled that from, after i find it again.
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@Possible Twilunestia: I agree. While i also like the ship, it just doesn't fit, in this particular story. Other stories? Yeah, i could easily see it segueing from Twiluna or Twilestia (sometimes, even the occasional Lunestia does this!) into Twilunestia, but not this one. The normal, 'Yeah, i could see that happening,' feeling i get when i think of the threesome... just isn't there like with other stories.
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Looks like Celestia's gun comes from here.
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No, you can't win when the story gets your mind to think of sexy-times and then you just read that one line and…no…
And yeas, you should definitely look at APM if you haven't, probably the funniest thing I've ever seen.
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Yep. Thanks for that.
2759846 I totally forgot about this awesome explanation for her mark as well.
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That one never really convinced me at all. From the show I got the distinct impression that the cutie mark came about from self-realisation and Derpy didn't get that at the time. Plus I'm not sure that I like that Derpy's special talent is to be beautiful, innocent, cross-eyed and fragile.
Nah, I'll stick to dreamwalking or bubble-wrangling, thanks
That part and the paragraphs around it caused me to stop and re-read those few paragraphs cause I was laughing so much. Although Im no fan of bondage, even in its mild forms such as this, the comedy brought it back any and all browny points it lost. Not a nice way for Luna to inform her sister she was in love with Twi, but certainly an effective way.
The dream scene afterward was very sweet and I thought it gave balance to everything else in the chapter as well as allowing a more sombre, thoughtful mood to come in.
All in all, great chapter. I look forward to more from you.
-i happy sotries ot this kind
-i the clop(best i readed so far)
-i twiluna
-i well placed fetish stuff
just one question: how much more do u have planned? PLSPLSPLS make endless ammounts of chapters
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Thanks, Flutterdash7. I must admit to having difficulty seeing exactly where to draw the line with the fetish / bondage stuff. At the basic level, either Twilight or Luna have had restricted movement almost every time they've been together. I have a fondness for the concept, as I'm sure any reader can see.
How does this chapter differ from say the first where Twilight was wrapped in a sheet, the second with the stocks, the sweet factory chapter where she was coated in toffee? Okay, that one was just plain weird, but it was fun to write. This chapter has had multiple comments about fetish levels where previous ones have had none or less.
How would the next section be viewed? Is it 'harder' as there is less freedom of movement, or is it 'softer' because there are less indicators for distress / frustration?
This is a bit of a blind spot for me - the characters are having fun and either one of them would it stop instantly if they thought otherwise.
For the record, after the next scene, things should calm down a bit (less 'hardcore') until, maybe, the penultimate scene (I have a rough idea what needs to happen there, but it is still some way off and subject to change; I have no plans to change the tone of the story (I'm going for a happy, consensual and slightly comedic tone, if that wasn't obvious), but I will need to be careful how I write it).
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Thanks, IJustWatch, I appreciate the comments. I think the above paragraphs should answer most of your question, but to make it clear: I have a story outlined for this. I've had to replot four? five? times now and will probably have to do so again. That said, there are two more chapters already written, one more on the go, and at best guess seven or eight chapters after that. That number is very much subject to change.
The formula is very much open to expansion, but I want a definite end in sight and regular updates rather than a roaming thing with updates whenever I feel like it.
I've already dropped a dream sequence ('The Island of Dr. Maybe!' Twilight exploring a mad scientist island, basically; I dropped it because I wasn't feeling the humour or finding many ways to make it sexy) and I have lots of ideas jotted down for scenes that I can't fit into the story proper due to plot / timing constraints. Maybe I'll do a few side-stories after I've finished the main thing, if I feel I have the energy.
2775769 ...and hey, the way you've written it so far, its been hilarious pretty much the whole time. which is one of the reasons I dont simply skip through each clop scene. (plus this is just straight up a well written story.)
Amazing... That's all I got... It's freakin amazing
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Thanks guys
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this might be askin a bit much but... Nightmare Moon soon???
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Sorry Carmack21, NMM won't be showing for several chapters yet. Luna has issues around NMM and doesn't want to play as her. I also have issues with NMM - she's going to be hard to write for without breaking into the fetish / bondage territory that is upsetting a lot of readers.
I had originally planned something heavier than what we have had so far (throwing Twilight around a little, temporary (agreed) removal of safewords, maybe some 'male' phantasmal servants dressed in illusions to be lunar guards) Twilight would have been enjoying it, but it seems as though a lot of my readers wouldn't.
Now I've cut back on the spanking etc., Twilight actually enjoying that stuff would be ridiculous, so I've had to tame the encounter down a lot in my head. It's getting to the point where even a relatively light fear / trust / magic dominance play could be beyond the pale and I have to serious reconsider how I'm going to end this thing.
Woah. Derpy as a Dream Walker.
Curveball.
Love the clop. Also, Luna holds Night Court?
Hmm...
Equines do need constant hoof-care...
Twilight, you smart, sexy nurse; you read your book!
i will continue to put in the hello nurse gag.
almost every scene RD is in she is flying