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Oh, I think you're doing marvelously.
I have to agree with kesh -- you are doing well. Things are falling apart for Twi quite nicely.
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Thanks guys, but you didn't see the thousands of words I deleted when I realised I'd written myself into a corner or experience the irritation of having to replot this thing for a third time.
You'll also note that the clop:story ratio is all over the place with the different chapters, which isn't the way I wanted it. Ah well, I'm doing this for the learning experience, and I'm certainly getting that.
I like it so far.
It's almost like a drug-induced Discord hallucination put into words.
Now comes the hardest part of telling your relationship Twilight Sparkle: Telling your family.
"Oh fuck" made my day
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even better was the last line of the chapter.
Hah, poor Twilight she needs to save more often. You should save your game after you've done something successfully.
Haha, happens to me when I play games, I die and find out that my last save was like 2 hrs earlier...
Anyways good story man!!
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Thanks guys - I really appreciate all the feedback I get.
this story is tantalizingly good. The romance, the comedy, the clop all blended into a smooth story that goes down easy and leaves you with a warm sensation of feels. I like your work and look forward to reading more.
Cant wait for next chapter, its an enjoyable tale
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Thanks very much! I appreciate your kind words. I hope to maintain the quality if I can.
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Thanks, Carmack21, but the next chapter is going to be several days away, at least
It's at 5000 words at the moment, but not yet finished and needs very heavy editing on top of that. Additional delays include 'Ridiculous Fishing' and 'Neverwinter' eating my free time and my hitting a bit of a writing challenge with the story - I'm trying to make the repeat of the dream and picnic day actually worth reading and it's not going well.
Bear with me, is what I'm trying to say.
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Well, good luck... need someone to talk to im here just shoot me a pm because its ridiculously hard to find out when someone replies to a comment now
My mag's empty, gotta reload!