Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash were best friends since the first day they met. But when a terrible disaster strikes Ponyville, Rainbow Dash is left alone.
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A very moving story. definitely had a man tear or two
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so sad
manly tears... luna buck it, this fanfic is awesome
Poor Fluttershy.
Manly tears.
I need some Flutterdash now
nice story just 1 thing though princess's should be changed to princesses
Very Good. Shed a single tear, but I found it a little predictable, and rainbow constantly ignoring her friends kind of flat... seemed to drag the story on, but thumbs up overall!
YOU KILLED FLUTTERSHY!!!!!! HOW DARE YOU!!!! I HAVE RUN OUT OF MANLY TEARS
This was an amazing story, Legacy. Thanks for the opportunity to proofread it for you. I enjoyed ever second of it. Not so manly tears were shed.
GREAT WE'RE GONNA NEED SOME FULL-LIFES & POSSIBLY CURAJAS. ANYONE KNOW WHERE TO FIND THE SPELL BOOK? XD.
BUT SERIOUSLY SAD STORY. I FEEL FOR RD.
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This is probably one of the most emotionally moving stories I have ever read and an excellent piece of work. Only one thing that I noticed was a bit of a continuity-breaker for me was when Rainbow was bashing her face into the mirror, she cuts herself but her friends never noticed this? It is minor, but did confuse me a bit, but aside from that this was amazingly well done.
Buck one or two tears. I can't count how many I've shed
That was well done. There were a couple grammar things I noticed, but failed to mark for mention later. But they were nothing major, so don't worry about it too much. So, overall, this was a very nice story. Well played
Well played with my feelings
does anybody know the name of the fanfic where rainbow dash is old and was married to fluttershy before she died? i love that fan fic and now i can find it! plz help
1699890 its i might have been
Needs some serious work. The transition into memory was a little choppy and you had some redundant lines.
I may be more of a follower than a writer, but I feel like I should write a happier ending
couple of complaints, one, it is a huge pet peeve of mine when writing is not indented. two it was too short, everything happened too fast, it could have really benefited from being a much longer multi chapter story of events leading up to fluttershy's death, and then having a couple more chapters going through rainbow dash's grief. three you used were instead of we're too many times
You, sir, know how to mess with my feels.
1699890
how about you try looking in you history (ctrl h) that works for me most of the time u just have to make sure you have the right device
I would have made her like not really dead but really beat up and hungry and she wakes up in the coffin
Look, I don't cry much. Well, that's a total lie. Ok, let me rephrase that. I don't cry much in front of others. I was sitting in my armchair at my nan's house reading this. My nan and aunt(Nan's Sister) were awake. I cried right then and there as I was reading. I couldn't help it!
So close to tears, and I don't cry often. +1