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  • E The Married Life

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Blog Posts48

  • 44w, 5d

    I hate how every time I'm posting a blog on here it's always dealing with my feelings, I wish for once I could post a story and maybe say something worthwhile for once. But, I really just don't know what to do these days. I seem to feel depressed more and more often, and so very little seems to make me feel better. I'm so sorry to all of you that I've pretty much stopped writing, but I can barely convince myself to continue on with my existence, much less write a story about something.

    All I can ever seem to think about is just how much I hate myself, about all the mistakes I made and how badly I fucked up my life. Nothing I do seems to change the way I feel in the long run, everything I do seems so damn pointless. My girlfriend for a time was the only thing that made me feel substantially better, but thinking about that only makes me feel more alone.

    I know now I'm certainly no artist, and I never really claimed to be. I can barely even describe my own fucking emotions properly, what's an artist if they can't even express their own emotions? Whatever creativity I made of had seems to have gone away, along with so many other things. Again I hate having to explain my feelings in a blog, yet I have so few people to seriously talk to, and so few ways to actually express my emotions. I'm so sick of life, yet, we're supposed to continue living it arn't we? Even if it's hell.

    5 comments · 139 views
  • 54w, 4d
    John de Lancie

    So I was watching the fantastic show known as Breaking Bad, and who do I suddenly see in it? None other than Q himself! I had no idea he was in it, and for some reason it took me a few lines to recognize him, but I was oh so happy when I did. All I can say is it takes one hell of an actor to be able to voice in a show about ponies and also star in a show completely about meth.

    8 comments · 146 views
  • 57w, 4d
    A Question

    Recently, I've been finding it more and more difficult to come up with reasons for why I should live this exsistence that we call life. Lonliness is a very difficult emotion to overcome... So, what makes you really happy? What makes you feel truly alive? What makes you want to keep going even when you feel horrible?

    19 comments · 213 views
  • 59w, 1h
    New Story (Possibly)

    As I said to some in my previous blog post, my girlfriend recently left me. I'm still trying to deal with it; and god, is it making life hard... But, maybe there's some sort of good out of it, because it's given me the inspiration to write, and a story idea. I used to find writing therapeutic, and I was able to release a lot of pent up emotions by doing it. I'm hoping, at least, that it will be the same now...

    2 comments · 121 views
  • 59w, 6d
    Anyone out there?

    I know I haven't posted anything in awhile, but I just wanted to know if anyone still cares about me and my stories.

    25 comments · 206 views
  • ...

Discord waits alone and forgotten in the Canterlot gardens, brooding over his hatred for the princess and wondering who truly was the monster between them. But an unlikely visit one night changes him and his feelings for Celestia...

First Published
20th Dec 2011
Last Modified
26th Dec 2011
#1 · 153w, 23h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

This dynamic between Discord and Celestia interests me greatly. I usually write it as hatred, but it works both ways. Well done. :pinkiehappy:

#2 · 153w, 23h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

That...was sad. And depressing. But, in thus being sad and depressing, it was also really lovely. Short and simple; too bad it says it's complete. Personally, I would love to see more. Discord and Celestia always intrigue me, since the two seemed to have SOME kind of hidden connection that was never focused on. This made me want to cry; how can you NOT feel sorry for Discord? The horrified way he looked when he was imprisoned...the fact that he showed anger when he called out Celestia and said that "he didn't put ponies into stone" or whatever he said...the way that he wasn't really "evil" as more as he was just a guy who loved to have extreme's just so sad. :pinkiesad2:

#3 · 153w, 23h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

beautifully written.... we need a decent discord celstia shipping thats a few chapters long

#4 · 153w, 22h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

THANKS FOR FUCKING UP MY NIGHT! And right before I sleep as well... good fucking job on the story by the way, really sad and depressing and it almost made me shed a manly tear.....FUCK.....Discord is so misunderstood.

#5 · 153w, 22h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

oh misunderstood.

I NEED A SEQUEL FOR THIS!! one where discord is freed again. maybe like...after a hundred years or whatever. and then he and celest form..discolestia!!!

or another idea is that he's freed the moment he stops hating and shit and then he and celestia get together and it freaks everypony out :rainbowlaugh:

#6 · 153w, 21h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Poor discord... I can partially relate with his desire for fun, regardless of what others thought.

#7 · 153w, 21h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Please wright another chapter!!!!

#8 · 153w, 21h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

I agree with hiy:

we need a sequel some time in the distant future where he escapes.

#9 · 153w, 18h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

I humbly request a sequel!

#10 · 153w, 18h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

sequels are a good thing. i think you should do one:rainbowdetermined2:

#11 · 153w, 17h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

:fluttercry:   I love this pairing!

#12 · 153w, 14h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Sequel, please. This deserves one.

#13 · 153w, 13h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

:flutterrage: There better be more of this or I will kill you and then bring you back 2 life so I can kill you again!

please keep up the awesome work and do please make more :twilightsmile:

#14 · 153w, 13h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Hm...Short and sweet.

It seems a bit unlikely that Discord would have never realized that Celestia might feel anything but hate for him. I guess I could imagine it, if they never really met before they were banished. I was under the impression they had, though, and if they did, Discord changing his mind so suddenly or being so surprised doesn't make much sense.

#15 · 153w, 11h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

WOW, I was not expecting this much popularity :rainbowderp:

I thank all of you who read and commented on it, and about a sequel....

I wasn't originally planing it, but I'm starting to think I don't have a choice...

I'll get one out as early as possible, so keep on the watch :twilightsmile:

#16 · 153w, 11h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

this totally puts the bad characters into a good light, it was sad, and yet it was awesome, thank you for writing this :3

#17 · 153w, 10h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

And now I'm sad face all over. This was amazing I can't for a sequel :D

#18 · 153w, 9h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·


#19 · 153w, 9h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

O.O..........*stands up and starts to clap* this is awesome , amazing , well written, buitefuly described..... i found it amazing bravo for my good sir bravo for u ........... u better make a seqel or me and meh army *waves hands and armys of elites humans demions magicians and dwarfs* will acend upon u

#20 · 153w, 8h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

i relay enjoyed reading this, good story and writing, to bad it was only a short story:applecry:

hope you make a sequel, you have alto to work whit and many directions you can go in.

I who'd easily read it the second it came out´:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

#21 · 153w, 8h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

fantastically written and a brilliant portrayal of my favorite villain.

BRAVO GOOD SIR!:moustache:

(also please write a chapter two. the ending seems to have the faintest hint of a clifhanger on it for you)

#22 · 153w, 8h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

I may not have read the whole thing yet, but DANG THIS IS SOME GOOD STUFF! :derpytongue2:

#23 · 153w, 7h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

THIS IS really good, I liked it :derpytongue2:

#24 · 153w, 7h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Don't write a sequel! :flutterrage:

'Cuz then I might miss it. :trollestia:

Another chapter will do just fine! :pinkiehappy:

#25 · 153w, 6h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·


Ya know, that does sound like a much better idea. With the amount of people who have tracked this, might as well.

Changing status to incomplete for now.

#26 · 153w, 6h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

This was very...well, interesting to say the least. If you continue it, I'd definitely consider reading. :ajsmug:

#27 · 153w, 6h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Just a question, is this based off of the story "Discordantly"? There are some similar details shared in both, and just kind of made me wonder.

To those who haven't seen it:

I absolutely recommend that you do.  

#28 · 153w, 6h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Other than that, absolutely amazing!

#29 · 153w, 6h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·


Yes, this was inspired by "Discordantly" I love that story, one of the best DiscordXCelestia stories out there.

#30 · 153w, 4h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

If you do make a sequel please don't make it like a future fic, I couldn't bear the though knowing that none of the Mane 6 or anyone else we know for that matter aren't alive anymore (Except Celestia, Luna, and Discord obviously)

Other then that I loved this story.

#31 · 153w, 3h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

>>78027 You better hope to Celestia that your sequel does well dude.

Otherwise.... I think some bronies here will attempt to go Cupcakes on you...

Or worse. Then again, nobody knows where you live, so you should be safe.

#32 · 153w, 2h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

::fluttershysad::fluttershyouch::fluttercry::fluttershbad: continue dood! it so greaT!

#33 · 153w, 1h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

I've seen a lot of sad stuff, and it takes a lot to actually move me.

You have done that. I humbly yet eagerly wait for the next chapter.:pinkiesmile:

#34 · 153w, 58m ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Yeeey! Discolove!:pinkiehappy:

#35 · 153w, 49m ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

More, for the love of all that is good in this world, more.

Another chance?

The elements setting him free?


*sobs self to sleep*

#36 · 153w, 7m ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Aw man. I wanted to write a quasi-shipfic between Celestia and Discord, but you beat me to it.

You won't get upset when I finally got around to writing that, would you?

#37 · 152w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

BETS OF THE BEST!:pinkiecrazy:

#38 · 152w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

I like is story, tracking it. I like how it is based on "Discordantly". However i found out one mistake, in this line.:pinkiesad2:

"“Discord…” The white Alicorn walked up to him, looking his hideous form up and down.":pinkiegasp:

I think you meant "looking at his hideous form" Otherwise it is great!:pinkiehappy:

#39 · 152w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Interesting. Tracked and left unrated for now.

#40 · 152w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

You will recieve an arrow to the knee if I don't see a second chapter soon.:pinkiecrazy:

You've taken a strange approach to the two characters and I really like it.Keep up the good work!:moustache:

#41 · 152w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·


Why would I? The more CelestiaXDiscord fics out there the better! Spread the love!

#42 · 152w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Annnnd I read this JUST before reading the "Discorded ponies" series, Discord breaking Trixie and the horrifying epilogue included.

Wow.  Its kind of funny that Pinkie in the follow-up series "Reharmonized" by the same author whines about the prevalence of "Cupcakes" on the web.  She had least has a reputation as a round, sensitive character in the show to shield her from that trouble.

Discord doesn't have any wide-spread defenses against that story....

#43 · 152w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

I now support DisLestia.

#44 · 152w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·


No, the way he had it was perfectly fine. See, this is something you learn about writing very quickly if you want to succeed. You have to learn how writing works, and how to exploit grammar. The way he wrote it was completely correct.

#47 · 152w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

In my head I can see a possible second chapter that I would do, but who knows, you will most likely do something completely different, but just as great. :pinkiehappy:

#48 · 152w, 1d ago · · · Return ·

Absolutely amazing chapter. I was hoping that Discord would've been set free on accident. A chance to redeem yourself doesn't happen often!

#49 · 152w, 1d ago · · · Return ·

Your writing technique and story telling is just amazing. I only have one thing to say. You better keep going with this! :ajsmug:

#50 · 152w, 1d ago · · · Return ·

*the box pooped open* i giggled

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