Harmony Divided

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Twilight and the gang must find a way to fix a rewriten history or the three tribes will be doomed to a life of slavery! But how will they do that if they are all forced apart?
Cover art by AnjnosFTW

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DayDrifter75

DayDrifter75 #1 · Mar 6th, 2013 · · ·

The cover art and description seem interesting enough. I'll have to check this out in a bit. Sounds good so far, even before reading.

Mr Pones

Mr Pones #2 · Mar 6th, 2013 · · ·

Dayum, the artists rendition of Commander Hurricane looks even more like an angry lesbian than I previously imagined.

Jawmax

Jawmax #3 · Mar 6th, 2013 · · ·

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Actually in his version he more thinks of Hurricane as a stallion.

Starry Eyed

Starry Eyed #4 · Mar 6th, 2013 · · ·

in the description, I think you meant "Life of slavery" not "Live of slavery."

Shadymissionary

Shadymissionary #5 · Mar 7th, 2013 · · ·

Looks very promising. Keep it up!

Alex Warlorn

Alex Warlorn #6 · May 18th, 2013 · · ·

It seems Celestia's fears were wrong. In spite of the changes to history, families and ponies remain even if they've lived very different lives. They didn't cease to exist.

Alex Warlorn

Alex Warlorn #7 · May 18th, 2013 · · ·

Maybe because souls can't be destroyed so time and space has to work a way around them?

Jawmax

Jawmax #8 · May 18th, 2013 · · ·

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I'm afraid not Alex, I just haven't got to the ones that did vanish yet.

Alex Warlorn

Alex Warlorn #9 · May 18th, 2013 · · ·

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Woudn't that mean there are also now ponies who were born who weren't before?

Jawmax

Jawmax #10 · May 18th, 2013 · · ·

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That can be very true, but can we please not go into this? It's late and I don't think I have the energy for that kind discussion.

But if we think of things like how you set up the POV universe there is a work around that is that the souls could have been born as someone else that could have very different lives. They don't just vanish but wait for the time to born into the new timeline. If the change is corrected they reset back to how they were.

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