Based on AlexWarlorn's POV Series
Twilight and her friends have overthrown the Princesses and now suppress free will in the name of harmony. Apple Bloom and Sweetie Bell go on a journey to find a way to stop the "Queens of Harmony" from taking over the world. Can the six be saved or is the only way to stop them is to end them?
When I asked Alex is it was okay for me use this part of his work he gave me relevant spoilers of some of his upcoming work. So until this can publish would he showed me this story will on hiatus. I don't want to give anything away.
Chapters (4)
Ooooooh snap. This ain't good.
Not good at all.
Twilight! What have you done?
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Queen Pinkie Pie, "SAVED EQUESTRIA! WHOO-HOO!"
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I respectfully disagree, Queen Pinkie.
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Queen Pinkie Pie, "Okay, there's the 'respectfully disagree' door. We have pie. We used to have cake but everypony kept thinking I was lying. Do you like chocolate pie?"
2607158 Huh... is that the part where you brainwash me or do I really get the chocolate pie?
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Queen Pinkie Pie, "I pinkie promise you get chocolate pie."
Ok, this is just creepy. The way that Twilight and the others slowly descend into knight templarhood. It appears that they've taken one ideal (harmony) and raised it up as the most important thing in the world, and now see that as justification to do , well, just about everything. Instead of working with ponies, slowly helping them fight their demons all the way through, now it's a world they're building toward that's, well, to be frank, kinda like one of those "nightmare" worlds, only in collaboration.
You see, as great as such ideas may be, you all go against the alicorn elders in one regard: Fauna Luster and Buddy hold sacred the powers of free will to show how life will find a way to survive and NOT destroy itself. By using the gifts of fauna luster coupled with the magic of the rainbow of light, you seek to use absolute empathy as a tool to obliterate any sort of "negative personality" found anywhere in new Earth. And on top of that, it's queens like you that so often give the term queen a bad taste on popular culture.
(blink)
(beat)
HEEEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!
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Queen Pinkie Pie, "You sound like you some happy sauce, a soft bed, and some saturday morning cartoons."
Jawmax, since you're so amazingly awesome, I've put you on my watch list on DeviantART.
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Thanks
4031176 Anytime. ;)
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Is there any cheese? Just asking.
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Queen Pinkie, "I'm sure that can be arranged."
Will this ever be finished?
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Yes it will sorry.
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Cool.
A lot of exposition, so it felt rushed.
Though this chapter teaches one thing. When a nation is in chaos or turmoil and their overseas operations are going wrong, that is when the forces of tyranny make their mover, take over the government and impose their will on the individuals.
I would have loved this story to have finished. It has caught my interest. Oh well. And the trail we blaze song was wonderful touch.
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I do plan on finishing it. Also I felt like I had to make a lot of adjustments to mesh with another writers work but it should be a problem anymore.
Ah, this lives again. Gilda's Free Will huh? OK, I can see that.
Huh? I think you misspelled that. What were you trying to say?
What comes next?
How do you feel about OCs? More specifically, the OCs made by other people?
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What does that have to do with the story?
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I'm okay as long as they are well made and this is not a request to have yours in this story.