I am a purebred Briton who likes to write sci-fi and watch ponies.
(First person.) I awake one day too find myself falling from the sky with nothing but a broken iPhone and the cloths on my back. So what's a kid to do when he finds himself in a world full of talking ponies and a nightmare in his mind.
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My first story so please be kind
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Good Job, but it feels a little rushed.
No offense mind you, but I recommend you slow down to make it more detailed and colorful.
Also, if you need a proofreader, I know three besides myself, all of which work for the fun of it. I personally would never have spelled a word correctly in my life without spell-check, so as a writer myself, I know firsthand that having someone offer to help me with my stories was the best thing I could have asked for. Most importantly, write something that you yourself would want to read and don't give up.
2217832 i agree
*enoby dark'ness demetnia TARA way
Anyway (hehe, way), HiE fic, auto assumptions from the pones, broken grammar, not much new.
Believe me pixels it may not seem it at the moment but this not your normal HIE fic.
light barrier? dont you mean sound barrier?
2252203the first boom was the sound the second was the light and damn thats fast
>> Mr.Pink I said it wasn't your average HiE fic.
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Twilight should be capitalized, it is in some places, but not all
so I'd be happy to help 
and the same for Rainbow Dash
You know, I really meant it when I said I could do some editing and proofreading for you for free. This is a great story
this is a very good story so far.
i can't wait to read the next chapter.
