A day of Cutie Mark Crusading takes a turn for the worse when a storm hits. The world suddenly dark and wet, the fillies find themselves trapped in the Everfree Forest, getting more and more lost with every turn. Tired, miserable and weak, they are about to give up hope when they find an empty, old building in a cluster of trees.
But shelter is not always the best choice, especially when the ‘empty’ shelter is home to some who do not wish to be found.
A/N If you see any mistakes, please feel free to let me know.
Thanks to NotTheOP for the title.
Chapters (2)
OH COME ON!
NO MARK?! Oh well...CONTINUE. DON'T LET HER DEATH GO TO WASTE AB AND SB.
Well, according to the site this was still posted my yesterday. I knew I should have stayed up longer...
But anyways, back to the story. The first thing to come in mind is: Now that's what I call a chapter! 7,000 words and my hopes are high.
Okay. I don't remember ordering myself a brand new load of feels. Is this one of those surprises some people keep on talking about? If it is, I shall call it a pleasant surprise. All these feels feel quite nice. Thank you for the feels
All in all, I loved this chapter just as much as I thought I would love it. I guess this is no surprise, but you have earned my fav and a nice green thumb up!
You have at least one person waiting for the next chapter, filled with eagerness like a 5-year old child in front of the biggest candy store there is. Imagine, you being five years old and your parents taking you to a candy store that has four floors full of candy and it's a special "it's all free, eat up!" day. I'm that eager right now. Alternatively, if you don't want to imagine that, here is a simpler form to represent my eagerness. I'm this ->
, yes, this ->
eager!
Wow. You warned me and this surely was worth the warning. Wow.
I'm still in a bit of a lock-up state after reading through 7,000 words in a digital format without doing any preparing or whatsoever, that's the main reason why I will not be writing a ten-paragraph short story about how this was a rather enjoyable chapter and so on. Simply, this was great, you're keeping your level of writing steadily and I think I can see some improvement here and there. Well done!
Oh boy, there will be more. More is good. I shall wait for more.
I like it. It just goes to show what can happen with the whole being in the wrong place at the wrong time.