We all have that one tomboyish friend who doesn't like girly things and wants nothing to do with them.
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Neon Blaze
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That was a cute story. No shipping, I like it. Very good job.
the part of the spa reminded of that one episode from Avatar the last Airbender With Katara and toph in Ba sing sa.
Holy shit, I didn't think anybody would actually catch that XD lol yes, it was a little cross-reference.
oh the hijinks that would ensue if Rarity got involved. actually, forcing Rarity to listen to some brutal dubstep. . . .
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Hmmmm... a little stiff and janky in places, but overall very cute. Good job
I was a little surprised you didn't throw Rarity into the mix considering her interest in makeovers and fashion, but it was a nice story all in all. Pacing needs a little work, but not too bad.
Cute story
This story has been reviewed by The Equestrian Critics Society
Story Title: Vinyl's Day Out
Author: Neon Blaze
Reviewed by: Charelzzz
In the end, the story has some entertainment value and may be worth a quick read to dedicated fans of Octavia and Vinyl Scratch, but it lacks vision, drama, or any sort of challenge to established perceptions of the characters.
Full Review
Score: 5.5/10
wub wub wub
good story that is all
Finally, an Octavia-Vinyl Scratch fic that's NOT a ship if. I thought it was cute. Friendly but not romantic. :) good job.
I never liked "Ships" and that's all you get out of vinyl and octavia, so this was awesome to see! thanks for the story, reminds me of me and my friend. other than the makeover part (stereotypically speaking, we're both male and we don't do that) part being that i relate more to that of octavia and my friend as vinyl.
I really liked this story! Like most of the comments said, people usually pair these two, but I see them more as best friends, like you portrayed them, or even as sisters. The dialoge matched each character's personality very well and this story also contained great descriptions.
However, one thing bugs me slightly. In the very first paragraph, Octavia opens her eyes to look at the clock when she wakes up, only to yawn, stretch, and open her eyes again