Take My Hoof

You opened your door and showed me there was hope
So we'll take it and run and show the world so they will know
- Breathe Carolina

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Destrey

Destrey #1 · Feb 9th, 2013 · · ·

That is so sweet, yet sad.
...so many feels.

Red Fox14

Red Fox14 #2 · Mar 1st, 2013 · · ·

This feels slightly shippy, but I could really care less. For someone who's just started, you've got quite a lot of talent.

SuperMarioDemon

SuperMarioDemon #3 · Mar 1st, 2013 · · ·

Blankscape

Blankscape #4 · Mar 18th, 2013 · 1 · ·

This story has been reviewed by the The Equestrian Critics Society.

Story Title: Take My Hoof

Author: Neon Blaze

Reviewed By: Blankscape

In the gist of things, this is one of those play-it safe stories that’s both done well and has very few faults about it. To the casual reader, it is a good twenty-minute read that lightly touches on a very mature subject and will no doubt leave many smiling hopefully at its end in spite of its briefness. A recommendation to anyone who’d like a mild introduction to what sad is about and/or is looking to have their heartstrings only strummed, not intensely plucked.

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Score: 8/10

Probably Jesus

Probably Jesus #5 · Jun 24th, 2013 · · ·

I'm not sure wether to be happy that everypony is ok..........or sad that Leah left

AlliePastel

AlliePastel #6 · Sep 15th, 2013 · · ·

Awh, that's such a sweet story. I honestly loved it

POOTISDragon225

POOTISDragon225 #7 · Apr 21st, 2017 · · ·

Huh. Didn't know my aunt was suicidal. Anyway, this, in all honesty, is a sad, yet sweet story. I enjoyed reading it pretty much the whole way through. Just the cover art though... I don't know if her head is too big or if her body is too small. Either way, it doesn't look right.

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