When Vinyl and Octavia become friends, Octy begins to wonder why she's never seen Vinyl without her infamous purple shades. What is the reason behind them? Will Octavia ever get to see the eyes of her only friend?
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2081079
No prob. I do it on most stories I read (which is a LOT).
Also, I suggest deleting my earlier comment.
Interesting start, I want to see where it goes form here. Tracking
2081112 alright, i'll do that
2081202 Yay!
2081112 damn... forgot to save that comment.
2081261
...You ass.
I meant AFTER.
2081270 don't worry, i remember some of your advise...
2081279
Use the back button. You should be able to find one that still has the comment.
2081285 okii
2081285 yeah, no.
2081304
Well, I can try to go back through later and do it again (can't guarantee I'll find the same amount). I am in the middle of something else right now (the same thing on a different story).
2081324 hey no worries. i'm already going through and fixing the stuff. it's easy to remember once i re-read it
2081334
Mostly just an extra capital letter in a sentence, period instead of comma, comma instead of period. I'll still glance through it once I am done with this other story.
2081348
alright, thanks.
this is going to be fun.
2084174
Glad ya think so.
Good start so far, I look forward to reading how this will turn out between the two
2104655
thanks
2144355
Haha. Gotta love them cliffhangers
And thanks. Dont worry, I plan on getting the next chapter out ASAP! Cross my heart and hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye!
2146335 You better keep to that promise.
Yeah! Or else!
Pinkie! where did you come from?
I'm not telling you hehe
PINKIE!
2146923
pinkie, have i ever broken a pinkie promise? except for that one time?
2148555 let me see: You Pinkie Promised you'd get me a birthday present, you Pinkie Warming with me. need I go on?
2148659
not my fault you don't consider vodka an acceptable present...
MOAR!
Vinyl raised her voice, the terror still evident, if lesser at this point. "Um, am I the only pony here who doesn't understand what the crap is going on here?"
Nope.
I'm gonna guess Luna in disguise
Um... Wat?
2213900
lol, yeah, don't worry. you will...
2212941
But of course! I just need to get my laptop fixed...
2214945
you shall find out soon enough...
2215274
POTATOES?
Umm......so i liked the first two....
2235699
lol dont worry, it gets better soon
Just some seriousness injury a, nothing to worry about
Damn autocorrect really fucked up that comment
2434046
It's not that serious of an injury, and besides which, Octavia knows her shit.
....... what.....I don't.... why... ugh, all I can say is this:
HELL YEAH! OCTAVIA IS NOW 20% MORE BADASS! OCTAVIA PHILLIHARMONICA FOR PRESIDENT!
oops! sorry, got too excited.
2471827
BUCK YEAH! Octy should totally run for presidency-wait...Equestria is a hierarchy...
2471949 *smiles* I can fix that! *throws a smoke bomb. it clears to reveal me in an Assassins' outfit* Demon Auditore Firenza Pie at your service, I live to serve the rightful leader of Equestria, Octavia Philliharmonica *bows head*
2476271
What if she doesn't want to rule equestria? there's a lot of stress involved...
2478025 oh yeah....... *stands back up* that does make sense.... also, we'd have to kill Luna and Cadence and Blueblood and Shining Armor and Twilight as well...... and that is a lot of work for one Assassin Pony. oh well, maybe some other time. Can I keep the outfit on though? It's comfy
2481253
*giggles* Of course you can keep the outfit, but, *glowers at you* lay one hoof on Luna and you'll find yourself at the end of a rope...
2481703 Whoa there, who do you think I work for? *turns around and moves little cape aside, revealing Lunar Republic symbol* The Pony Assassins are allies to the Lunar Republic. We are normally tasked with dealing with the Solar Shinobi, which are our Solar Empire counterparts.
2481725
*smiles* Okay! I didn't want to end up hurting you anyways, but now I am reassured that you'll keep your hooves off of her.
2481888 I wouldn't hurt Luna if I was payed to, she is best Princess. *smiles evily* but I am more than an assassin if you catch my drift. I am normally payed to serve Luna in any way she needs. you jelly?
2485876
HEY! THAT IS MY SORTA ON/OFF MAREFRIEND YOU'RE REFERRING TO!
2486358 Actually, if you recall, there are more mares than stallions in Equestria. So Luna must have added us BOTH to her harem.
2490708
-_-...I'm watching you...
2490719 And we are watching you. *Luna appears behind Lyca*
Ah, Princess, good day
Indeed it is, my Assassin