• Member Since 17th Jan, 2013
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FrostyDawn


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Rarity is stuck in a desert. She can't speak. She has no idea where she is, how she got there, or what to do. But a mountain in the distance gives some ray of hope.

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 28 )

Neato! Another Journey story! :pinkiehappy:
I actually posted the first chapter of my own about 12 hours ago

I found herself in her psychical body again

I think you meant "She found herself in her physical body again.":twilightsmile:

Hmmmm.... interesting... :moustache:
Not sure where you're going with this but it is amusing and I await whats to be next!

I don't know what this is a crossover with, but since you're writing it I will trust in your abilities and continue reading.

2189210 its a cross over from the game journey :twilightsmile:

:rainbowlaugh: u r nao my OFFICIAL favorite fiction writer. No. 1 writer: Michael Chriton - my fav book of his - prey

Comment posted by sectoid deleted January 9th

Awesome! Hope to see more soon! :twilightsmile:

A beautiful story for a beautiful game, great job sir and keep it up!

And this scene was just so gorgeous whenever I remember it, one of the two most beautiful sights in the game IMO!:rainbowkiss:

2204747 Heheheh... just wait for the ending... I will not disappoint. :pinkiehappy:

>Searching for random Crossover fics
>Find this
>Notice the picture
>Love that game
>Opened up and started playing the soundtrack from the game.
>All of the wins

Spoiler alert
Inb4 Rarity and Red die in the snow

Wait a week, I'm going to tell you something.

I as well, wonder what Rarity's special task may be. Hmmmm :trixieshiftright:

Nice! A :twistnerd:! I much prefer this than a quick rundown of exactly what happens in the game but with a pony in it.

What are you planning good sir?:trixieshiftright:

*deleted due to changes*

2224647 Well, I hesitated with the epilogue, and I kind of agree that it's a little cheap. But I made that ending for a reason. I don't want to spoil anything later, so I'll just say this: Rarity isn't the only one.

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* deleted because spoilers*

2225070 I see what you're getting at. In the future, I'll try to be a little more subtle with any hints.

Comment posted by FrostyDawn deleted Mar 7th, 2013

That has got to be the most multi-lingual song I've ever seen...

Hmmm.... An Ancestor in a previous chapter stated that they couldn't come back together until there was a death. I have a sneaking suspicion that SOMEBODY/PONY'S days are numbered..... I hope I'm wrong....

2244876 I'll just assume you haven't played the game yet.

Not enough info in the description or the comments for me to get a clear idea of what it's about. So I won't read it. try to put some more into your description so the audience can get an idea of what the stories about. In other words, catch the audiences attention.

Revisited this story while I was skimming through my favorites and I see the small changes you had made and I have to say I approve!

I'm not sure you'll still see this but I hope you're still going at it!

I want you to know that when my grandmother was in the hospital in 2013, I printed this entire story out and read it to her by her bedside. While she eventually died in that hospital, I have never forgotten this story because of those memories. I like to think it helped her enjoy those final days. Thank you.

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