This is a sequel to Friendship VS Machine
The REDs can't seem to catch a break when it comes to the citizens of Ponyville. But this time, it's for the worse.
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Just a friendly piece of advice... you might want to change it to 'deceit'. I was trying to figure out what deciet, then I realized it was probably a typo.
2275634 Thanks for that.
2275682 Np buddy, anything to help a fellow author.
Brain-washing insect? GOOD IDEA! Pretty creative, since most people just use magic/science to brainwash people but bugs? Original Idea mate. I can only imagine what could happen it one infected SAXTON HALE, he would (most likely) overpower the mind control and reverse its effects, creating an army of SAXTON HALES with his pure mannlyness.
But what does big me though is how easily their traveling back and forth now, it's just commonplace now to travel to a different dimension and not a big deal. But it does open a gateway for others. *cough*Merasmus,HHH,Mononculous,BLU team,someobsurepersonlikeCharlesDarlingfromthecomic,The Administrator*Cough*
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Yay update
Is good. Please continue.
Yes... I like this new chapter.
2282133 Keep your bowtie on. Don't expect anything too far out of the ordinary.
An update a day? that's awesome!
Pyro is insane now?
Everyone is DED.
2307804 Forget that, he can talk!!!!! EVERYONE RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!!!!!!!!!!!!!
...now that I think about it, you didn't base Pyro off of, say, this guy, did you?
2312000 Yes... but I also wanted him to have a Wraith Wrap too.
SNOIPAH NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
*Ahem* nice chapter, as always.
DEMOPAN???!!!! Noooooooooooo
Scoutdash is very common. Doesn't bother me. The only uncommon pairing I've ever seen will always be Waking Nightmare's pairings.(Besides FemPyroEngie)
Wait...how the hell didn't I notice this when it came out?I should begin watching you...
2476504 same here bro but it still so awesome
Current clues:
Venomous bug
Rarity in TF2 World
"Must feed ze queen"
Possible outcomes:
Zombie-like plague
Chrysalis somehow entering the world of TF2 and starting to command the venomous bugs
The disease spreading into Equestria
and practically killing everyonegod dammit RBD
Please, no romance. They're mercenaries in a war game for gods sake!
My god, corrupted pyro!
I knew it was her! I knew it!
Corruption progress:
Scout: Unknown
Soldier: Location and status unknown
Pyro: Corrupted
Demoman: Corrupted
Heavy: Corrupted
Engineer: Healthy
Sniper: Suspected to be corrupted
Medic: Corrupted
Spy: Corrupted, location unknown
Twilight Sparkle: Healthy
Rarity: Healthy
Pinkie Pie: Healthy
Applejack: Healthy
Rainbow Dash: Unknown
Fluttershy: Healthy
Equestria: 5% Corrupted
Earth: 1% Corrupted, corrupted subjects are currently in Equestria.
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Saxton....HAAAALE!
Stout Shako... Two refined...
I C WAT U DID THAR
WHY IS NOBODY SHOWING SORROW AND DESPAIR AT THE SIGHT OF INFECTED HEAVY!?
HOLY BUCK AN UPDATE
Madic! NUUU!!
My god. Maybe I should re read this story XD I forgot what it was about... Sorry. Anyways, yay! Update!
Oh my, is this the end of the trilogy? The stories were a little rushed.
I love how your rushed story somehow and mysteriously managed to get some positive feels active. Whereas other rushed fiction couldn't. Maybe it was because of the prequels that did it. Nice work.
That was a bit rushed,bro. Rushing is a bad idea.
Awesome story's man!!! Plz make a fourth I know this one is the last story but I need more!!!!!
3181251 Demopan is coming for U
This story was amazing, in my honest opinion. This most certainly deserves to have a sequel to show how the RED's are doing in Equestria, and how they are fitting in. Although, the end just seems a bit...rushed,with no sort of epic battle between QC and the soldier, or how the spy got knocked out. Other than that, it's well made. Plus, the way Infected Pyro is just fear inducingly cool. Please make this a series.
Run b**** RUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNn
heavy does not feel so good
Is there more to this