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Ahhh, I get it. You sneaky sneak.
Either I'm reading too much into a nonexistent metonymy, or you're a heckuva author.
Have a stache.
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Whatever floats your boat.
:what !
I dont get it did the balloon after going further away pinkie stop staring at it long egnough to be forgotten and her stop out of her trance or was it never pinkiepie
2184999 It's confusing, I know. What do you think happened?
That was the best chase story i ever read. Also i played Thomas The Tank Engine Soundtrack: The Runaway to fit in what's happening. Have a listen to it.
Looks like something I do -- I reword a sentence but then forget to delete all the words from the old version.
Another tiny error, but the good news is that tiny ones are all I've seen so far.
Am I reading this wrong? If she's unaware of the obstacle, why did she try to stop?
It's an interesting story. Do just a little bit of proofreading and you're golden.
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Thanks for pointing those out. Fixed now, and other errors were corrected as well.