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flamevulture17


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Trixie has been defeated, her only hope is to travel west. She hopes to find new ground to settle and rebuild her life, but meets someone who might be able to help her move on and gain the strength she needs to let her past go. What better someone to do that than a human explorer that just happens to cross paths. Nothing is certain when myth meets myth.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 9 )

Its pretty good, but there are a couple of things here and there that are offputting.

Well, in the creative aspect. For example: calling him 'Hunter.' I mean... its just a little /too cliche.

The football player?

5032988 LOL. That would be funny though, plus I'm a huge Eagles fan, so yeah. Keep going with this though. It looks very interesting and I want to know where this is going.

Not a bad confrontation, not bad at all. I'm rather glad Trixie showed some competence in her defence, quite refreshing. Lead on.

Nice little chapter, no one side is more focused than other and their attitudes seem quite good. If you can get an editor/proof reader, that would be a bonus.

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