There are feelings and emotions even Luna can't comprehend. Neither suppressing or embracing her pity, she encounters an Earth pony who has traveled from her hometown just to see Princess Luna for a special reason.
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I was all ready to read your story then this:
Broke me right out of the immersion and I wasn't even past the first paragraph!
Now off to read the rest.
Just finished reading the chapter and I have to say that I enjoyed it. Like I said before I like reading about other's headcannon and I am looking forward to seeing how you have Luna answer Dream Catcher's question.
I also think that you need to get someone to pass through this to check for errors as I spotted a few of them while reading. I'd read this over again and point them out for you, but I don't really have the time right now. I probably should to get back writing my essay...
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I caught that simple mistake shortly after submitting the story. I really need a proofreader. I usually edit them myself extensively, but even that isn't enough. It's probably because this was a little rushed.
So is there more to come?
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Sorry, forgot to change from incomplete to complete. Thanks for the reminder. There could be more to this story, but I don't think we need to know the rest.
found these for you . Story looks good
the glass of her balcony window and stare of in space [off into ]
and as of two ago [two what ??]
Does she no trust me? [ not ] ?
She asked me what dreams ( ? ) when I read her a bedtime story [ were ]
few more.
Earth pony was truth to her word [ true]
That very idea would come do define both her and Twinkle Toe [ to ]
The deeper she thought of it, the more it reigned true. [ rang ]