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We learn the bolts have to save Equestria, but they too succumb to the evil ancient villain pony known as Doom. He had plagued the world before, byt was stopped by Celestia and Luna. He is accidentally brought back to the world again. Soarin and the Wonderbolts must rush to Canterlot to protect Celestia, but this pony isn't like any other magician. In all this, Soarin also finds out more about his past and who his mother really is because of doom. In the end, it is up to Soarin to find a secret weapon and deliver it to Celestia before it is too late. (Sequel to the fabulous Wonderbolts part 1.) After Doom is defeated, Soarin reaches his first challenge as captain of the RGAF (Royal Guard Airforce) tension between the sisters causes alliances, daring moves, spying, and eventual war between them both. Soarin is expected to fight with Celestia, but he doesn't want to fight against Luna. He is stuck in the middle of this war that tears Equestia into two halves.

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this is great stuff :pinkiehappy:

Thanks I shall be posting more by the end of the week :twilightsheepish:

YAYAY Chapter 2 :D :pinkiehappy:

also, are we expecting any more romance in the story, or just adventure?

Yes more romance will come up in chapter 3 I promise.

Wow....... That was good :moustache:

d'waaaw TBD; this is the only chapter i DIDNT SKIM...so im pretty lost right now... conclusion:
Evil King, named Doom is trying to take over equestria...i think...almost like sombra.:rainbowhuh:

Yes that's basically it and little details like he was Celestia's first student in magic, but mostly yeah he is trying to take over Equestria :pinkiehappy:

Once again great chapter! :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:


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To whom it may concern: I am sorry that I haven't posted a new chapter yet, I haven't had the opportunity to write :unsuresweetie: but rest assured, chapter 4 will be out tomorrow, Saturday the latest. :pinkiehappy:

Great ending! :pinkiehappy: Btw are you doing a season 3?

Yes I am....chapter one of part 3 will be out sometimes this week :moustache:

Ok so I have good news and bad news. Good news, I finished chapter one of part 3. Bad news, I can't make part three it's own story :fluttercry: instead, I have to post part three on part two instead. I tried publishing it as its own story and failed. I am terribly sorry for this inconvenience. I will post chapter 1 of part 3 today on this book. I will label the chapter accordingly so my readers will know. Once again, sorry for this inconvenience

Spying and lies. Oh ya this is going to be good :yay:

Luna gonna be grandmother!!!!!! yay :yay:

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