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So in this, you meet soarin and follow him on his journey to becoming one of the best Wonderbolts in all of Equestria. Little does he know, there are twists and turns all down the road and the bolts are involved in combat as well as aerial performances. (Romance is downplayed, more action then romance.)

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Hey just pointing this out, did you put signed instead of sighed?

I think I might have. Thanks for pointing this out, I will correct this. :ajsmug:

Nice story, only thing was a couple of small mistakes like could rather than cloud, really nice story though :twilightsmile:

Umm this makes no sense. They would never recruit 10 new Wonderbolt a at once. And if RD performed in the top two of every challenge, how did she not get picked??

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