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Dusk Quill


I once was lost, but now I'm found. Just a quiet blue unicorn with a passion for the written word.

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Edit: Well, it was supposed to be a one-shot, but because of the overwhelming response for more and all the positive reception its been getting, I'm going to continue this a little more! Just a little bit. It's still going to be a short story, nothing major. I hope you all enjoy it! Please leave a vote/comment if you took the time to read!

My contribution to the holiday, a short, silly one-shot I wanted to do, featuring Shining Armor and Fleethoof. How would you go about telling somepony you liked them? How would you leave them a little token of affection? Hopefully not this way.

Happy (belated now) Valentine's/Hearts and Hooves Day, everyone!

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 38 )

You better continue this:raritywink:

That was the most hilarious thing ever! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Oh, and I got some EXPERT advice for these guys!

Silver out!

That was AWESOME!
They WERE like little kids that'd been caught doing something bad! :twilightsmile::twilightsheepish:
That was great! Also, I kinda wish I knew just what it had been that slipped from Fleet's bag that Cadance ended up reading... :twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

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See 2133962. I fully intended this to be a once and done little jab at Valentine's, but seeing as how this fun little project just surpassed Skyfall in views, and is well on its way to passing it in total views, I might add another chapter or two, maybe just for a little more depth and to wrap it all up... if the public wants it. :twilightsmile:

-- DQ

2138377 Hey just be sure to do what you enjoy doing xD :twilightsmile:

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I laughed so much at how this could twist the story (probably more than I should have)! :rainbowlaugh:

Oh dear, I can see everyone expecting this to turn into a clopfic after that!

Great chapter! Romantic comedy indeed! :raritywink::twilightsmile:

Silver out!

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Believe it or not, I am actually capable of writing about things other than death and destruction! :rainbowlaugh:

And now it's Fleethoof's turn! I'm half expecting a wave of downvotes just for having an OC in it :rainbowlaugh:

Amazing writing quality, it feels as I was there. Excellent job. The emotions were heavy but good. (That probably didn't make any sense.) :scootangel::twilightsmile:

Silver out!

I completely missed this story when it kicked off [I had for some ridiculous reason I forgot to follow you, but my stupidity has been .... redeemed?] but the scene in Cadence's front room made me laugh ..... a lot. Reminds me of a true story ...... :twilightblush:

But back to the main topic ..... the story! Really good as always and good use of comedy with out going over the top. No faults I can flag up either. My one question is would this "one shot" be related to the continuation of your main story or would it be a "spin off" and not related what so ever.

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Grazie, amico mio! :twilightsmile:

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Redeemed is a good word to use there, but I wouldn't say "stupidity"! More like... forgetfulness! We're all guilty of that. :twilightsheepish:

I'm glad you could relate, especially since I based that moment off a true story too! And to answer your question, no, this isn't a spin-off of the main series. It is out of chronological order, as I planned for this to happen after the next part of Skyfall, but with the Valentine's season coming around, I felt it would be funny and appropriate to put up. So it's canon (fanon?) to the storyline, but just slightly out of order. I'll fix that once the other stories pop up.

In all honesty, I never expected it to gain as much footing as it did! I'm very pleasantly surprised! :twilightblush:

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Eh, I can work with forgetfulness ....

And, you have a window escape story??? How interesting, you have to share it!! And thanks for answering the question, cleared up my mind slightly so I can get back to my plans for world domination "studying" :derpytongue2:
But then you add

once the other stories pop up

, letting on that there could be multiple stories to come?!?! The plot thickens ..... :pinkiecrazy:

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I do, I do. And perhaps I will, although it's slightly more painful than Fleethoof and Shining's :rainbowlaugh:

Yes, yes... "studying"... :trixieshiftright: And yes! Skyfall is a series of stories! There will be more, I promise! More action, more darkness, more development, more characters, more places, more romance... and more of whatever else comes to mind that people want! :pinkiehappy:

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Now THAT is some good news, and now that my redemption is complete, I'll actually read it when in comes out this time.
And I'd expect a window escape story from any floor other from the ground floor to be painful ...... our "method" followed that principle ... so it hurt ... but not as much as I thought it would :fluttershyouch:

something tells me that a ton of collateral damage will happen soon. (cadence is kind of a w***** here though. 2 guys at once?)

Comment posted by insightguy deleted Feb 21st, 2013

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YAY! :yay:

Lol I had a bush to help me... :derpytongue2:

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"Collateral damage" is my middle name! Dusk Collateral Damage Quill! :rainbowdetermined2:

Yeah, she's playing the field, testing her options. She is the Princess of Love, after all. I've (unfortunately) had the misfortune to read some things where her... 'promiscuity' is emphasized faaaaar beyond what I'd ever feel comfortable taking it... :pinkiesick:

Aaaand it's DONE!!

I saved the letter for very last, just for you, 2137166. :rainbowlaugh:

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Ah the bush, the classic landing ground and one of the best if i don't say so myself.

Me, I was running from my CRAZY ex wielding a butter knife (She couldn't find any of the sharp knives) so I bolted for the window and jumped into a skip full of cardboard :facehoof:

Its true that Fleethoof depends on Cadance. If she didn't help him through his issues, his PTSD would be a lot worse.

Silver out!

GOD DAMMMIT I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS ALREADY

are you going to make more chapters??? :fluttercry: (PLEASE SAY YES, PLEASE SAY YES!) :twilightblush:

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Not for this one - it's done. But I will continue the story in another fic since it's very clear people would like me to write more romantic stuff. :raritywink:

Damn this blew Skyfall out of the water in terms of views. I still would rather read you other stuff but this is hilarious in the beginning and touching in the end. Even though I enjoyed this I think it has a lot to do with reading the normal stories and knowing the personalities of the characters.

Aim High: Fly, Fight, Win :rainbowdetermined2:

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It's getting up there in terms of blowing The Griffon War out of the water! People clearly prefer a romance to military action fiction. Who knew? :pinkiehappy:

Everything I've done so far is sequential to the Skyfall saga, because I love working with the characters I've lovingly molded and crafted myself. I'm going to start branching out into different sects very soon, but the Skyfall universe will always hold a special place in my heart. They're my babies... :twilightsmile:

SON OF A TROLL'S GREAT GRANDFATHER!!!!!
Where in the name of Celestia's holy horse shoes did THIS come from!?
I read it, loved it, and then left because it was a one shot... I'm going through your stories for details on the final battle at Skyfall and BOOM... I find this!?!

............screw it. Everything is on hold. I'm reading.

Boom!
There we go. Now I'm caught up with the world. Actually, discovering this was a wonderful little surprise. This short story was absolutely wonderful and I found myself laughing and feeling my heart flutter throughout it. It's scenes/stories like these that make me really want Cadance and Fleethoof to be together. I personally love their dynamic and how they fit together. I love Mightnight, and I know she's obviously best pony, but so far no pony has been able to match how powerful and wonderful the relationship between Cadance and Fleethoof is.

It's also great to see you do other stuff besides war and black ops stuff. Variety is the spice of life after all.
Right, well I'll stop gushing over here about how awesome this short story was or how much I love Cadance and Fleethoof.
:coolphoto: Keep up zee awesome work! :coolphoto:

Aargh! I just found this and it is awesome! I Haven't started to read it yet, but I can't wait to see how Fleethoof acts as a civilian! I really liked him as a soldier, and this is a nice change from the sadness and tragedy of The Griffon War (I loved it though!)
:pinkiehappy:

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Very glad you enjoyed it! People seem to like the other side of Fleethoof and every character so much, I think another might be in order soon. :pinkiehappy:

P.S. Thanks for the fave! :twilightsmile:

PresentPerfect
Author Interviewer

Heyyyy, how could she get Luna to do anything if this is taking place before the show? <.<

PresentPerfect
Author Interviewer

Also you should probably take the song lyrics out. :B Not only are they cheesy (don't get me wrong, I like that song), but if the mods find out, they'll delete your story and ban your account and probably sell your children and/or grandparents into slavery. They take that kind of thing seriously now!

PresentPerfect
Author Interviewer

I guess my question is, why didn't she choose Fleethoof? He seems to have made the stronger argument in this piece, but we know how the story goes. :B

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It's not really taking place before the show, but more or less in the middle of S1 and S2 at this point. I sort of destroyed skewed the timeline a tad.

Also, advice happily taken and lyrics beat up, nuked, and sent to the moon! :pinkiehappy: I had forgotten they were there in all honesty.

That was....AWSOME!!:pinkiehappy:....and also touching:fluttercry:

A beautiful story. Good job, be proud. :heart:

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