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Lookin' good. Please tell me Spike gets laid too...
Yay for comments!
@Clonetrooperkev: Awwww! That's awesome!
I can just imagine Pinkie singing that in a French arthouse cafe, dressed in tight black jeans and a knitted black turtleneck and beret, with a cigarette hanging from her mouth, crooning into the mic. Oh dammit, plot bunnies! 
@ Marshmellowsundae: Additional pairings are always welcome, although I'm trying to work it out in my head so it's not so squicky. But given the stuff that goes on in there, I can't make any promises...
2151100 I dunno, dood.
Twilight becomes a mare magnet and Spike isn't a tag on the story or in the description...I doubt it, dood.
It's a Twiharem, I'm fine with this, dood.
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O, I haven't watched that yet, but I think Pinkie would make a great art nouveau singer!
It may just be me, but your descriptions of coat colors goes way overboard at times. We'll know what you mean if you call 'em purple and orange, going too far makes it read like a trashy romance novel.
Don't get me wrong, I'm enjoying the story immensely, but it does tend to jerk me out of my immersion.
>> AlwaystheCurious
>> Animemetalhead
I was trying to think of the most stupidly witty things to say, but they all ended up more the former than the latter. Here were some of the front runners:
1) Can't a little lesbian dream of some romance in her clopfics?
2) I guess that's my anal side coming out!
Obviously the first, I'm not that little. The second.... poor choice of words for a fic like this, lol.
I'll just settle with: OMG you guys are so right. I will reign in that runaway pony before we end up head over hock.
But now if makes me wonder if I should edit the previous chapters...
Oh! I can still use those colours when I focus on Rarity! Time building out proper colour names for each of the ponies NOT LOST! Yay!
BTW is there a FAQ or something for the reply box? I don't really know how to use it... like tagging people and stuff...
EDIT: Nevermind, I found it!
Well now I need to see how this story shall turn out and I might as well follow it to the end!
*Sigh... so I had to add this fic to the "Incest" clopfic group folder because.... well, of the next chapter...
Just followin' da rulz.
Edit:
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You will not be disappointed! Well, IMO, anyway, haha...
I like where this is heading
Last I checked, Rarity and Nurse Redheart have white coats; Derpy's coat is light grey.
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Ooops! Yes you are absolutely right! I was being, um, very strict about the colours but I'm feeling much better now!
I will adjust.
And sorry everyone, I am having a little trouble writing the clop (who would have guessed writing good clop would be so, um... I was going to say difficult...) Anyway, I hope to have three clop chapters out in time for Sunday Mass; I usually get a lot of writing done when I'm not planning to sneak attack my partner...
...What?
I think equestria's screwed if you know what I mean
Liking this story so far but just a stupid question, is Twilight considered ugly in this story?
Because this line makes me wonder
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Twilight does Sparkle in her own way, she's not as conventionally beautiful (or stereotyped) as the others. I mean put her next to the cowfilly, the tomcolt, the filly next door, the party filly and the fashionista... it's very easy to be overshadowed.
2175781 Well it's not really rape if it is magically induced by the victim. I mean Twilights alicorn fluid is an impossibly strong aphrodisiac, capable of breaking through almost any mental barrier. I think Twilight would have been better had spike just took care of her rather than getting others involved.
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I'm with ya there. though things are really going to degrade down hill once Celestia arrives.
Before I even begin.... Will there be males? And, by males, I mean will there be males with any mares?
And thus, Twilight Sparkle single-hoofedly brought about the apocalypse.
Other than the odd spelling error here and there, this fic is very well-written. One thing I will point out though, thus far you have referred to at least two characters as being "light grey" in color. Rarity and Nurse Redheart are not light grey. Their coats are white. Light grey is closer to Derpy's color.
Keep up the good work, and good luck with the next chapter.
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.) Also, if I can guarantee that if a girl isn't interested, she isn't interested. What occurred was an unscheduled medical procedure performed by licensed and accredited professionals. That there is some unusual effects where magical backlash (or is it?) is concerned is par for the course (haha, I just realized what I typed there.) Anyway, the procedure normally would have consent by the patient, or in this case, close family/friends. With no DNR in place, the medical professional can make decisions in dire need... 
I won't say something inane like "consent is overrated," because for obvious reasons, it's not (unless it's a ravishment fantasy
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Aaaaaaand maybe a chapter with S/S. I know S/S for some can be squicky, so I'll provide a warning in the Author's Notes in the prior chapter. Unfortunately, I expect that chapter to be very hard as I have noting to hang that particular hat on.
The story is roughed out and there are plans for some M/S, M/M/S and M/S/S but no more than four... does that make any sense?
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Oops! Haha, I will sift through and try to edit those out. And thanks!
I just wanna see chrysalis get bonked by Twilight.
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Please keep up the good work
2177383 I don't care about S/S. And yes, it does make sense. I shall not be reading, though. Mare/Stallion is no good. Good luck nonetheless.
Nice.
WHOA, DOOD.
Futa-Twilight? If I wasn't invested in this already, I am so onboard now, dood.
EDIT: I just came back to realize that... Twilight becomes Mare-Magnet = the characters listed in description(excluding Twilight) will be walking funny for days, dood.
Yay, my first Futafic...and it's Twilight...
This would be a better chapter if it weren't for the Luna part at the beginning. All it is is an exposition dump of things we more or less know from just watching the series. About the only new things we get from that are that Celestia and Luna made the Elements of Harmony, and that Luna is jealous of and has the hots for Twilight. The rest is just repeating things we've already learned from watching the series. Just as a matter of good writing it's generally better to only give as much exposition as is immediately necessary to the plot. If it doesn't have anything to do with whats going on now, save it till it is. That section would be much better if you cut it back to just the bit about Luna being the Mistress of the Dark and what that means, her being jealous of Twilight, and her implied attraction to Twilight. The history lesson is largely redundant.
In contrast, the expo dump at the end of the chapter from Chrysalis (despite being a long, uninterrupted bout of exposition) was immediately relevant to the plot and something we didn't already know.
Lol oh my glob i love how you list off reasons of why twilight has grown on other people and just keep dragging people in. More characters = better, may faust have mercy when the shit storm approaches. This fic is going to be featured and is one of the better stories, only four chapters in and im hooked. Keep up the good work and im surprised this is your first clopfic. Thumbs up and hope u write more
and futatwi is win btw 
Obviously, Twilight is the center of attention in all of this.
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THANK YOU EVERYONE FOR YOUR KIND COMMENTS!
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Haha, I don't know whether or not I should be proud or ashamed of that... so I'm just going to go with the evil laugh.
Mwahahahahahahahahaha-HA!
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Oooo! Yay! Critical response, how I love thee!
To explain: in my Kim Possible fanfics, I always approached it as people who were already familiar with the show, but then I started thinking about it. As writers we all have a slightly different take on canon, and how canonical aspects extrapolate (such as when to use panicked Twilight versus calm Twilight.) I also thought, well, what about readers who don't care to over think aspects of canon that are neither explicitly or implicitly dealt with? So I thought I'd use the exposition to reach out to the lowest common denominator of the new or the uninformed fan.
Thank you for reminding me that I'm not just writing for the uninitiated but for the serious fan. It was a necessary reality check, and gave me a good kick in the rump that I was pretty much just being lazy (and probably because I'm writing this more off the cuff than from a serious, plotted outline; just me getting my thoughts down on paper to solidify my perspective.
) I can definitely craft the old and new information in media res by peppering enough vanilla canon across the fic to inform the new fan without boring the bronies and fanfillies. 
Thanks again!
NO NOOO!
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Um...? Please elaborate?
2225754 well its just so... umm I can't necessarily explain it really, what i'm trying to say is that this plot twist it's so intense. I hope I explained the comment better.
I thought for sure Twilight was going to take a more dominant role in this story from how things sounded. So far though it is the complete opposite. She is being raped by three mares who claim to now like her. Twilight was quite vocal and distinct telling them no, stop. They ignored her and are raping her repeatedly. This is grimdark territory here, hardly romance.
THAT WAS SEXY!
This is just getting AMAZING!!!
Will elaborate on this story next chapter, when I'm not tired
Oh Twilight, you will be quite busy from now on...
But I want to eat! I'm starving!
Nonono, you can't waste any time for such trivial things. Onward, brave filly! Your destiny awaits!
I hope you manage to write the next chapter soon
Hi Everypony!
I've been having problems with saving my work on here and have been trying to find someway to keep writing... well at least I think I've worked out the saving problem. So it's back to the fic!
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Haha I've had that problem a lot. My very first Kim Possible fanfic, I started with Yori, literally, a character that only appeared in four episodes of all four KP seasons. Twilight will start slowly, becuase she will be the focus throughout the fic. I wanted to show the affect from a more personal perspective. The "consent-is-overated/ravishment" scene to me was a good mix of taboo and disturbed, and skirted the edge of rape pretty closely... but then we have those sorts of um, fantasies, ok? Men hardly have those fantasies, but if we're honest, most of us women do have those.
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Thanks. Unfortunately, I'm not sure how I'm going to keep the smexy up each chapter without plot or character development.
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Heehee! I can't wait! Better finish this as soon as I can!
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Working on it! Finally...
I must say, this fic has been absolutely fantastic so far, and has immediately become one of the clopfics whose updates I will love the most.
As I've said elsewhere, this fandom really needs more good Mind Control fics, and this one is really hitting all my favorite points. Especially considering how it's shaping up to be an "everything that moves" clopfic. Those are my favorite.
I wonder, will there ever be any more direct instances of control/obedience, or will it remain as a mostly passive form of forced attraction?
Either way it's great, and I can't wait for more!
Very good, however there must be a better term for liquid magic than "alicorn" but great job writing that in as a major plot point.
So basically Twilight just cast a spell that gets her raped constantly. owch.
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This is good! Can´t wait for the next chapter!
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When there are clouds in the sky, and they are grey.
You may be sad but remember that love will pas away.
For Twilight
After the shower is the sun.
Will be shining.
Sorry. I noticed the lyrics were incomplete so my OCD kicked in.
Honestly, I was pretty jealous. But of the Nurses or of Twilight, I still don't know
Hi Everypony!
Sorry for the long silence. Life happens and sometimes it takes you away from things that you love (I mean the writing, not the clop, lol.) Anyway, so many things have happened I practically feel like a new me!
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This fic is an examination of of sexuality, tied into something as crazy and Mr. Smartypants. Twilight has just become Ms. Smexypants, for all intents and purposes. There is a long developmental arc for her sexuality, her attractiveness, her powers, all her relationships, and even the political landscape of Equestria and how they are changed.
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It's got ravishment/noncon, but not rape (seriously, why do people think that rape feels good for the victim? It never does.) domination, mind-control.
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Thanks! When I first started out this fic, I wasn't looking at rewriting the traditional uses of "alicorn." In this fic, Alicorn is used as both a euphemism and an additional... um... organ? Also, since all three races of ponies have intrinsic magic to them (with Pinkie Pie the only earth pony to approach Alicorn levels in raw ability and power) Twilight's especially power and now potently attractive alicorn substance is like a siren's call to them... and given that there is a very sensually charged and personal nature to alicorn horns (as substantiated implicitly from canon; only very intimate unicorns touch horns)
Once again, sorry for the long absence!
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I believe you commented on scorpion instead of me on that second one. His says nothing about rape.
Point blank, sex always feels good unless they are hurting them during. Unless they want it, it's rape, even if they change their mind half way, that first part was considered rape. If they are asleep, it's touchy and could be reconsidered on technicalities and how they feel about each other plus prior permissions and such, but it is usually still considered rape. It's also rape if they are in a debilitated state of mind where they don't understand the situation or really what's going on. This is why child sex is outlawed, because most of the time, the kid is being manipulated (whether through playing on their hormones and inexperience or their fears) or forced and then manipulated to say it didn't happen or just plain aren't sure what's happening but it feels good so they go with it.
So no, maybe Twilight isn't raped constantly through the fic, but that bit about her getting sexed up in her sleep? That was rape unless twilight was at least partially aware and able to stop them when she wanted or had given them consent before hand. To say the least, it's a messy situation that calls for a bit of "I didn't mind" from Twilight before it can be called in the clear.
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Wait... that might have been the technicality needed for the previous argument... they went overboard but you might be able to play that off with Twi waking up and going "I totally approve".
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Twilight will need some time to work through her feelings about what was done in the name of medical services. But it's going to be a bit of a ride until then.
Unfortunately my mate wanted to watch Red Dawn, so no writing. Maybe tonight... hopefully. And wow, what a disastrously bad movie.
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er, the original or the remake?
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The remake, I was only a year old when the first one came out and never watched it.