What happens to you when you die? Do you go to an afterlife like heaven and meet a god? Do you go to Hell and receive eternal punishment? Maybe reincarnation where you live again? Or do you just rot in a hole in the ground?
What about becoming trapped in a foal's mind in a world inhabited by magical talking ponies? Nah, that's just silly.
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Well I've been wrong before.
Follow the life of a man as he has to experience life once more from birth to death. Only one thing its not his life, and he isn't in control of the body.
Chapters (3)
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good story i enjoyed it.
The idea seems original, but it's ruined by lots of grammatical error, missing capitalization and the story seems too fast paced for me.
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Thank you for your input, I am currently trying to get an editor for the story to fix any errors I might miss .
I would recommend using just plain text art and putting that picture in the first authors note rather than using it directly. That pony creator look is an instant asking for downvotes my friend.
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Well...I might be able edit for you. I'm currently working on something else, but judging by your current release speed I think I could manage. If that sounds okay, PM me.
Hm, the concept seems interesting. Guy dies and is now a backseat driver in a unicorn foal's mind. Though you kind of ruin it by skipping ahead so fast.
Think of all the shenanigans that could be ensued. Maybe take over for short periods of time. Maybe mess with "dear brother and sister".
this is awesome!
fresh idea, executed perfectly
Epic. Just epic.
when will the next chapter come out?
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I've had a chapter almost done for a while, I guess I might as well finish it. I will probably upload it before next year, February at the latest.
3704811 ok. i can't what to read it.
3704811 You sunuvagun. UPLOAD IT NOW!
I can feel my it
The my should be taken out.
This is in the first chapter near the beginning.
(sorry had to stop reading for that.)
MORE BITCH!
This is a really good story I eagerly await your next chapter I want to see more interactions with Rey Dio and Lumonus Star
Oh, that's nice. Hmm, magical plushy may or may not become a plush golem controlled by the back seat driver, hmm? This is a nice fan fic and i also wished i had the skull to explain to toy how much I've enjoyed reading.
3 years later... Dude. Write more. I wuz interested...
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Interesting...sad to see this story hasn't been updated in eleven years