This started out as a joke or prank, in fairness. What do I care, that's behind me. I had enjoyed it at first, before I realised what was about to happen.
Then came all the months of darkness, confusion, and the cramped space, and no clue as to why?
Once I was finally born, or reborn, depending on how you see it? Then it became clear to me, even if I know next to nothing of what had been behind it. At least I know why it was dark, and cramped.
I had been sent off, into a new existence, but as an Equestrian pony. The recollections started to fade of, between two years of age, and was completely gone by the age of five. There is no turning back. I guess I'm a pony?
Chapters (6)
you need to fix the typos like pressing the w and not e just look through it and fix those please.
3774079 if that's what you mean, I fixed the first. Not sure how much it improve on the overall enjoyment of the story, but i fixed it.
If there is anything else, please feel free to point out what you find?
I hope I can make it feel right, for each and every character in the story.
Spelling Errors I noticed.
ofcause needs to be changed to ofcourse
poni is spelled pony
Element; Laughter the semi-colon does not need to be there make it a comma.
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Thanks, that should take care of the 'Poni' and no more 'ofcause' in the text, unless I missed it, Again?
These two are some of my older problems.
Edit: I just edided it.
any0ne know if that hypnotize yourself to be a pony ad is legit?probably not.whoops that's a zero not an o. not trying to be cool.
If only my computer were working, i'd extend an offer to proofread this. Either way, i eagerly await more.