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Seventeen year old Dawn has always struggled to make friends, despite her best efforts and the help of her father. After her anxiety prevents her from getting aquainted with the new girl in the neighborhood, she begins to believe she will never be able to get it right... and that's when a mysterious stone pulls her into Equestria, transforming her into a pony and throwing her into the path of Twilight Sparkle.

With Twilight's help, can the human-turned-pony find a way back home? She will need to be careful - her inter-universal excursion has not gone unnoticed...

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 21 )

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I like where this is going. :pinkiehappy:

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You have captured my interests. Here, have my like and favorite :moustache:

I like this story keep it up :moustache:

Well... the twilight bringing someone into Equestria accidentally scenario has been done before. Though i haven't seen this particular twist and you've obviously did some good thinking about the device. Additionally, the formatting and grammar indicates you have promise. What really gets me though is your synopsis. It's got a pretty good hook. Have a like. I'll be watching to see where this goes.

I had to scroll down through many paragraphs of boring, uninteresting filler to read a story that lives up to the brony code by inserting every bit of fandom garbage like pointless insertions of Derpy (named Ditzy in this) and the gag-inducing Faust name-drop. You had me at the beginning, but then your tangents of Asbergian attention to "how everyone would treat Twilight" bored me stiff.

This has, so far, been a very good read, please keep it up. :twilightsmile:

Very well written!

I certainly hope this is not the same old same old with HiE fics, because I rarely read them.

Congrats on capturing my full attention. Oh, and your Twilight Sparkle is excellent.

carry on, I shall read :twilightsmile:

adding to my read it later list.

gonna read it when I get the time. :pinkiesmile:

I want MOAR!!!!!!!:flutterrage:

Uhh, please?:pinkiehappy:

I realy like this so far, keep it up! :rainbowkiss:

OH MY GOD YOU'RE ALIVE!
Thank you :rainbowkiss:

It lives! This was a good chapter, although it felt slightly short. Any idea when the next one will be up?

nice. looking forward for the next chapter~ ^^

Here from Reddit (and left a much more detailed response there). I'll be looking forward to seeing where this goes. :twilightsmile:

Oh my god I love this.

Cute story so far, and we have a plot maybe weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee MOAR! :flutterrage:

Holy smokes, this updated! :pinkiehappy: Great to see you're still working on it!

I just referred someone here, actually, to that room description in Chapter 2 (which still ranks among the best room descriptions I've seen in ponyfic — yes, I'm serious about that).

Hmmmmm interesting...i cant wait to see what happens!:pinkiecrazy:

Where is the update? I WANT A UPDATE! :flutterrage:

Is this story dead?
I hope not because it is one of the best HIE's on this side...

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