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A friendly ball python who's know to disappear for a long time.
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There are a lot of things in the writing that don't really work-- I think. I won't give a downvote, but I feel like this majorly needed work. The paragraphs are jumpy, a lot of sentences don't have periods at the end, the characterization seems way off, and so on.
I think you should add tittle that makes some sense with the Story so others can know what part of the Story does it take place but thats just me.
Its pretty good, I'm not complaining.
2152828 like that
Onyx and Twilight together, totally called it
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Exactly.
What a bro
the title version should be "tales of onxy bedroom"
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hahahahahah.......and is all Raynor fault if it have happened
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I've never read human x pony clop fics unless there anthro, but I think I can make an exception. If this part of the story is written as well as the rest, than I think I'll enjoy it. I'm still at the part where he's at school, so it might be a wile before get to this point.
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Alcohol: getting people laid since the dawn of its creation.
"Onyx stepping into Celestia’s bedchambers..."
Just think about the awkward pause when celestia walks in...
Is there gonna be one with oxyx's exmarefriend?
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not a clop writter
sorry
2180895 *badum tss*
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Hey yeah, where is he, did he is sleeping in the basket beside Twilight bed? Because if he is, them he is officially the must heaviest sleeper I have ever seen. Oh well, at least those 2 will not have to worry about traumatize him
2386474 Very bottom of Ch 33. He's at Rarity's.
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Then I didn't say a thing
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Whatever you say then...
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Yes...yes...pinkie.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/img/mlfw9077-205384.gif good
new chapter
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twilight when she came
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rarity will find out about this, and then, all of equestria will know.
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and these were just too good to just ignore.
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2386445 love your picture
well here we go again!
Commander Pinkie: Soldier! what is the staus of the shitstorm??
Soldier: INCOMING!!!
I wont review as I'm tired and have a long day today (its 3 am!)
2386662 Thank you, I like your new picture as well. It's not so ... dream haunting...
i feel something wrong in the force.....as some sun god is piss....
2387647 yeah it's so cute
2389380 *screams internally*
DAWWW
The very best part of this fic is the red MS painted "clop version" written at the top.
Makes me laugh every time I see it in silver's story list.
And like that you've lost me
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im not the writter of this
i do not writte clop
2643696 it was an inside joke. A reference to hellsing abridged.
I can see it now; Spike in the corner, watching in speechless horror... furiously masturbating.
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this comment wins funniest comment of the month *presents spike masturbating trophy* your welcome
2993802OMFG!!!! i think i just bust a lung laughing so hard and woke everyone up in my house and my next door neighbors
thats actually quite nice if you read the story first to this point.
ît is really not important for me, but i think it had could be a good thing if you would let them make love a different way then last time, i think it is nearly the same. But since i love the main story (even if i readed it a bit to fast to reach that point of the story), i don´t care how this is written, i only read this because it would feel like i miss something from the story.
I like it that it didn´t feel like Twilight wanted the be with him for the sex, some other authors manage it always that the mares look like the only thing they would want, is sex. To often even Rainbow Dash looks like an sexaddict, and i am not very picky, i don´t care if they have sex maybe ev en to often without some cuddling or such a thing, but they could even try to show that they care for each other for more then that.
Long story short, i am glad that i read this story, i think it has a place in my favourites.
Is it weird to read clop but not clop to it dunno
WHAT IS THIS HERESY