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A Hoof-ful of Dust


You can't see the forest...

Comments ( 14 )

2078314 that is horrifying and adorable at the same time.. only on the internet i suppose :facehoof:

2078333 The word you're looking for is 'adorafying' :pinkiehappy:

2078333
It's mostly adorable. Lookit his widdle fuzzy face. I'm on Fluttershy's side here.

Very funny :rainbowlaugh: I had a good time reading this.

'Boris The Spider'

Oh, I see that song reference.

2079220
This is the song, for people who don't like The Who as much as us cool people. I was thinking of calling the spider something else - he seems more like a Herbert or a Winston - but that would probably just be confusing.

2079242 really i thought the spider was a reference to the comic book

You are a very cruel mare Fluttershy:flutterrage:.... I completely agree with Rainbow Dash (minus the icky references) and state whole heartedly that I am afraid of spiders. I will never look at Fluttershy again :fluttercry: She was a little mean back there. This story was made all the more funny because of Dash's reaction. I would have reacted the exact same way....

fimfic says it has 3 words too many. You could cut one here:

She was twisted her head,

(Very nice story.)

6982367 And another can be removed here:

Fluttershy shrugged. “Some ponies have strange ideas about spiders.” She looked at Rainbow. “But not you, right? Because Rainbow Dash isn’t afraid of spiders.”

Can be shortened to "Because you aren't afraid of spiders."

*Grins* Amusing and fun, like so many of your works.

howd you know my name was Boris

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