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A Hoof-ful of Dust


You can't see the forest...

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Not everything went as planned when Twilight undid her spell on Fluttershy. Written for EQD's Writer's Training Grounds #001.

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You know what? This would make an ace idea for a future episode of mlp, although it was adorable enough as it is. Have a thumbs up for good writing and for making me 'daw :D

Sounds wearily familiar...

3711752 Really? This fic is fresh and new to me. And awesome.

Loved it!:fluttercry:

Excellent!

Well this was automatically better than my entry.

This is the best of the WTG Flutterbat entries I read. Well written, very sweet, and consistent with the tone of the show. Well done! :yay:

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Hey man, that's not the way to think about things. Stick with writing stuff for the prompts and see how much you improve from the beginning to the end, find out a bit about what works for your writing and what doesn't - the only person you're competing with is yourself.

SO CUTE! Sweeter than apples!!! SQUEE!!! :yay:
I especially loved how you referred back to the maze, so Discord could show how impressed he was by her strength.

I do so enjoy your short works. Succinct and spot-on in what they're trying to convey. Delightful.

Ah, this was so wonderful! I was worried at first that Discord was just taunting Fluttershy to try to force her to change so he could have some fun, but of course he wasn't just going for that. So sweet. I love stories where Discord helps Fluttershy with things like this because he believes in her, not her element of harmony magic or whatever, just in her own strength of self.

Huh. This comforting side of Discord fits oddly well. I really like how it was balanced.

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! So adorable!:yay:

Very intriguing indeed, you do a lovely job with these characters.

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