I'm a Canadian gal who loves to write. :D
Elements of "Read It And Weep" with gender bent Rainbow Dash.
Rainbow Blitz is in the hospital with a broken wing, trying to avoid letting his friends know that he likes to read. All the while, a worried and loving Fluttershy just can't stay away from his side. Sweetness ensues with the two as a little love makes the stay a little less boring.
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2032279 I've read maybe one, two? I can't recall. XD But I wanted a hand in trying it out! Not to mention giving some FlutterBlitz some attention.
2032288 XD Hee! I've been Troped and Trademarked today! Wow!
2032454 I'll admit, sometimes we get carried away. I did try in some ways to tone it down, but that's how I write sometimes. How we do. And if you're not too fond of it, that's okay.
Besides, it's pure feel-good fun even if it makes someone laugh. XD We still did our job!
2032641 XD Well, we all have our styles, headcanons and stuff like that. And everyone's mileage varies on whatever stories they read, my own included. I will try to be more conscious of it in the future, however.
2032678 You're going to do that to mock me, aren't you? Look, if you're going to make fun of me now, please don't. I'm re-writing some bits here in the story and making them less snoogly and more "real", since I think it could use some work I wish I hadn't overlooked. I know this isn't to your tastes, which is perfectly okay, but I'm not really sure I'm okay with this right now.
2032745 Oh....XD I'm so sorry. I misconstrued your intentions since you were displeased with some of the content of the story, as well as pointing out the dining room and affinity for the colour blue, kind of like in a ha ha way, and how unreal the romance was. I had thought it was with the intention to even mock me for it since friends of mine tend to tease me about being a FlutterDash fan.
I just get a little defensive sometimes with people I don't know so well, and that is a fault of my own.
I do apologize for jumping to conclusions. If you'd like to extend a hand in friendship, that's perfectly fine by me.
2032826 Hello! X3 Nice to meet you! My turn now!
1. I'm a Canadian and twenty-two, will be twenty-three in May
2. I'm not insane, but I'm silly and quirky.
3. I'm quite easygoing and friendly, I only really get stern when I'm addressing something wrong or when someone needs it.
4. I'm actually very, very shy
5. Overall I actually like when people ask me questions.
6. Ironically, I don't usually have anything exciting to share, but I try to answer questions as best as I can.
7. I too will write or draw something for you periodically if you ask nicely :D
8. I write shipfics on whatever pairing from a series I love and am inspired to do.
9. Aside from a few ships I do like, I actually only have a few that I truly love.
2032888 Hee! I can't discern my own accent, but it might just check out.
I'd practiced British dialects since I was twelve, it's almost natural to me now too. XD Not the best, you can tell it's fake, but still.
To answer your question, I honestly couldn't tell you! I don't exactly have a favourite per se. But I love orchestras and choirs. Oh God I'm a sucker for those.
2033024 Well, I'm afraid it's really not that simple. I can sit back and say "Hey, I'm running the show here, buddy, shut up", but frankly, that's not something I feel comfortable with. If I make mistakes or something I should work on, I need to be told of this through a fresh pair of eyes. In some cases, yes, maybe I can simply say "This works for my story, I'm sorry it doesn't work for you", but that's when it comes down to personal taste. If there are some objective flaws that I need to know, that's where I have to sit back and think about them.
I need the criticism, I need to know where I have to improve.
It is your opinion, but you're also not being demanding. Suggesting, yes, offering tips, but not demanding. So I wouldn't worry about that. I don't take to demands, but suggestions, I do consider them if they work.
Now, as I'm writing this, I did go back and re-write some things. I could go back and do so again, and I will. Please, if you have any tips on how I can fix some objective flaws, tell me more!
As for the future story, here's the thing. Yes, it does have comedic undertones, but it is still meant to be fairly serious.
I never thought I'd say this about any gender-bending story (let alone read one), but this story was pretty good.
It was well written and interesting as your other stories, and I liked it!
I'm not going to lie, it's hard to see Rainbow Dash as a stallion. Guess I'm not used to the idea of gender-bendering
Still, cute story!
RULE 63! AHHHHHHH THE WORLD IS ENDING!
jk. I don't usually read rule 63, but this was a cute story. Very well done!
As always, remember to stay
GREAT!
2033605 Hey, I was once like that! XD Once upon a time, if a character was gender bent in a story, I just wouldn't be able to think of them as the sex they were changed into!
2034394 Thanks a lot!
I like your work, although i had a "COME ON!" moment in there when the rest of the girls came in. Nice job and I hop you continue some Flutterblitz in the future
. This story deserves 3 moustaches! 
2037292 We definitely will be doing some FlutterBlitz in the future, you can count on that!
2037297
Oh yeah i'd love to see some more Flutterblitz! this story was awesome!
You also could try some ButterDash in the future, at least I would be interested in seeing that.
2039164 Oh yes, we'll also be trying our hand at ButterDash!
A very interesting take on the idea and couple, if I may say so myself. I will agree that it is somewhat hard to see Rainbow Dash -or any other character for that matter- bender bent,but after a while one does get a feel for it. This was cutely written and made me laugh, something I was need of at the moment, so thank you.
Also,(addressing the author's note at the end) I don't believe I have ever seen a ButterDash story on any site. It would be rather interesting to see done.
If you ever write one, would be too much too ask if you inform me? I would like to see that.
2465743 Thanks very much! I'm glad you liked it!
I will most definitely do a ButterDash story, that's for sure! I'll let you know when, if the case is that you don't see it posted.
Ummm... I'm not sure what the point of making Rainbow a stallion was, but I still enjoyed it.
I have one thing to say. Were the hell is Dashie in all this?
I liked it
Awww... I got lost in the story. I'm supposed to be taking a test! ...Wait... Nope! NVM! I finished. lol