A reader and writer, but mostly a reader. I enjoy writing, shipping, and long walks on the beach.
Rainbow Dash is tired of spending Hearts and Hooves Day as one of the few ponies without a date. More importantly, she is tired of hiding her crush on Fluttershy. As Hearts and Hooves Day nears, she can't help but feel worried about how that special day will turn out.
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Another Flutterdash Fic...
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It's an interesting start. But I feel that it is kind of rushing through some good opportunities to really develop a story here.
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Yeah I was pushing to get this first chapter out. I'll take more time for the other chapters
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hhhhhhhhhhheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy buddy!
Good first part.
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Thanks!
my two favorite ponies in a romance fic around the holidays BUCK YES
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Good job.
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Thank you!
yes i am loving this fic
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Awww... thanks!
Ahhh.. Finally a fic from you. This should be good.
interesting... Keep up the good work.
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I figured it was about time I made a Flutterdash
Enjoying keep up the good work
She would always have somepony to love her.
That line make me think not all will end well in this little romance
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Glad you're enjoying it
I hope this ends well , I mean "If everything went right", still
Nice
Pretty
Short, but sweet chapter. There are also a few mistakes at the beginning. Second sentence of the second paragraph, and then when they get into bed together you say "Rainbow Dash was normally a very touchy pegasus" when I think you mean "wasn't".
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I honestly don't see a mistake in that sentence.
I did mean to say that Rainbow Dash was touchy.
I really don't have someone to proof-read so I'm sure there's other mistakes
1825549 "A book fell over on the floor but she ignored to pick it up." That just... doesn't make sense. "decided not to pick it up" makes sense, or "chose to ignore it" could work.
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Ah I see. Thank you!
Nice
Achievement get
First kiss
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love the story hope update soon
Sorry to disappoint anyone but it will be a while before I finish the last 2 chapters.
With the Christmas holiday I've been very busy and unable to make progress.
I won't be able to work on this story until after Christmas.
Sorry, hope you understand!
AWWWW!! dash is being all sappy! i love it when she's like this, she's actually really good at it.
*Looks at title*
I have a bad feeling about this...
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I think that's one of the main reasons I got into Flutterdash
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well, your very good at this, so keep it up. maybe even try your hand at other pairings for the group.
The dialogue feels a little flat at times, but this is very sweet, and I love the idea of pegasi giving feathers as a romantic gesture. :) Good work!
I've seen some weird things in pony fics, but Rainbow Dash asking for make-up ranks among the weirdest. It's gonna be interesting!
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Thanks! I always loved that idea too. It just seems like such an adorable thing to do
Thanks everyone for reading!
I had a lot of fun writing this and I intend to make more stories
Please let me know if there are any improvements I can make to better my writing skill
Speaking of stories.. there will be more Flutterdash!
verrrrrrrry nice. the moments were captured. =) the intensity was marvelously distributed. splendid.
even if you don't write a spot lighted flutterdash, they can always be there together in the group **grins**
though, i still don't know how i felt about the usage of the gala dresses... lol (not just in your story, of course)
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Thanks!
Oh Dash, that's the most romantic thing you've ever said. XD
This was very cute! An interesting exploration of Rainbow Dash's character, as well. Nice work!
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Sometimes I feel like she can be so romantic one minute and the next.. not so romantic
Thanks! Sometime in the future I hope to make a story showing Fluttershy's character more
So adorable. It was nice for the owner to stand up for them. Glad I got to read this.
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Thank you! I'm glad you liked it
The title had me going there for a sec anyway good job.
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Thanks!
Here comes trouble
Over all I liked it but I found some bits didn't seem to flow as well as the rest but when I pushed past it and continued reading I wasn't disappointed.
So good job and I hope to see more of you work in the future.
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Thank you for sticking around till the very end. I'm glad to hear that you liked it
I intend on learning more and continuing my writing
Glad to hear it
Very awesome
but there were some
Spelling mistakes 1."I am so sorry rainbow dash! I was so scarred. You spelt scarred like getting a scar , the way you want it is scared.
And 2. "Why?" Rainbow dash asked." This was the worst hearts and day ever. You forgot the hooves in hearts and hooves day
But other than that very good also funny
