It's Hearth's Warming Eve and Rainbow Dash is falling, not flying.
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Syn3rgy
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This is why I wish I could donate to you! So even more people can read pure brilliance!
But I'm poor 
WOW JIST WOW I LIKE IT
Great story. It's nice to see more from you, and this has been an interesting choice (Mostly because the others I have read were about Rainbow Dash losing her wings or outliving her friends). Even though I didn't cry, I got so many feels...
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"Complete" Waah, b-but we need to know if Twilight saved Dash! And how did Dash piece her life together if she did?
Great story More please!
this needs a sequel
so badly
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Flying...TO HEAVEN!!!!!!!!!!!
this needs a sequel it was that good.
I don't think this needs a sequel. This story by itself was good. The end was somewhat left to interpretation, which is something that is almost never done, or done terribly among fanfic writers. Astounding job as always, Syn3rgy.
You never fail to amaze me. This is brilliant!
Have a sequel or not, it's still brilliant!
Wow. That actually made me emit a single tear. Even the saddest fics I've read can't get one. This, while short, is easily great because of the depth of emotion conveyed. What a great piece of work!
This was an excellent story
I like mini stories and such this was cool 
The "And then" used at the very end seems like a little bit of a turn off for me, considering that would often be used in an abrupt manner of telling a fast paced story. Take the moment to bring that last sentence out just a few words longer, possibly three or four as it just seems to be so sudden.
"She was then falling no more; she was flying." Something along those lines would be better as it would indirectly refer to her, but still maintain that feeling of sadness coming from the story.
I do apologize though if I do happen to upset a few people with this..."whatever it could be called" of a comment.
That was just brilliant, sad but brilliant nonetheless.
Nothing bad can be said about this and do not make a sequel, I think it would just ruin this.
2015003
T'is a problem met by many.
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Get a job you dirty hobo <3
2018857 Go home xzeno, you're drunk...
~Syn3rgy
Was anyone else trying to get to the end before the song finished? I almost won, but the feels slowed me down. Adding the song to it brings quite a lot more depth and emotion, and the whole time, it practically radiated sadness. For most of the story though, sort of in the background, I was just wondering how she can think so much in only about 10 seconds? And I didn't realize that she had bound her wings to her sides until it actually said it. I was thinking she was just willing her body not to. I also found that you put in "may of" instead of "may have". I don't think I found any other mistakes, which is good. Anyway, the mood was quite depressing, and the cliffhanger was a good touch. Another great story to grace my favourites list.
.....no words can describe the beauty of this masterpiece....well done dear brony, well done.
2412149 Everyone needs to cry sometimes.
Cry, mate. Get it out and then wait another year
~syn3rgy
Woah, nice work giving us insight into rainbow's thoughts, that was intense
Not bad. The writing was a bit too florid for my tastes, and it rambled on for longer than necessary, but it managed to leave a lot left unsaid.
Also, why does this need a sequel? It's fine on its own, honestly.
If I were a dick...not just you're regular, 'haters gonna' hate' dick but a full on Dick, I'd probably write a comment like, 'Haha, I didn't get nah feels a all bruz!' and then proceed to insult and put into question the pride of everyone here for even contemplating the idea of crying over a story, thus cementing my manliness for yet another thirty seconds.
Good thing I'm not a dick then. But, I am a hardass. People have described me as one of those types of people before. So, when I say that this story gave me feels that had me physically cringing which took slamming my head through the plaster wall and ten minutes of inspirational music to get rid of...that is an accomplishment and I commend you. This is now in my top five feels list. You've earned it.
Now, onto the story itself. Overall, very well writ except for one little inconsistency that just doesn't sound right to me. Don't get me wrong, the entire story nearly gave me a heart attack of feels and if she hadn't been saved by Twlight (Saying this for my own sanity) then I'm pretty sure I would've been faceplanting through the brick wall instead of the plaster one. There was just that one little bit though that, for a second, ruined the flow for a second before it was picked up that second later.
Again, loved the story, but that little bit is, to me, a small black ant on an otherwise perfect picnic. Also, while I agree with 2018761 (The DocTor Shy) in that a sequel might ruin this, I am not completely against the idea, but I feel it would have to be a complete multi-chapter story probably involving redemption chapters, explanatory chapters, conciliatory chapters, etc. This story is too good to have just a one chapter sequel. I would love it if it evolved into a massive collection of chapters because it is so wonderfully well written but otherwise, it would just be killing the mood already set.
I better stop here lest I run the risk (if possible) of making even LESS sense. Thank you for this lovely work of fiction, dare I say, Masterpiece.
Happy New year.
-Boom
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