Rainbow Dash is put into a situation she had never experienced before, this cool pegasi caught off guard during a napping session in a tree. (Sexual themes may be viewed in the story, though anything of this concept, will not be fully written into the story.)
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Interesting way to start.
Keep it up!
Might want to fix your quote blocks.
3537046 All fixed! Thanks for pointing that out to me, I made a bit of a mistake inputting them the first time.
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No problem. So far, it's a good story.
I like this.
I like this a lot.
I like these whispers in the dark!
I'm confused.
Did Luna arrive on the train that Rarity left on, or... was she there the whole time? I seem to have missed the part when she actually arrived.
Sweet chapter, nonetheless.
I'll fix the plothole when I can access my pc c: Thanks for pointing that out. ^.^ ~TPWB
hmm starting to wonder if there will be scootadop in this story lol
Hey great story buddy i like it so much. It's so cool. :)
Mate, you gotta finish what you started. I know you think you have no talent in this area, but you have loads. Think of it this way.
In an rough estimate, I have read over 1111 stories, for the sake of an actual number, lets round it down to 1000.
On average, the stories have 10,000 words.
Considering the average person reads 300 words a minute, that would mean it would take, on average, 303.2 minutes to read a story. 303.2=5h 3mins
Since I've read around 1000
303.2x1000= 303,200mins
Let's convert it to hours and days.
303,200/60=5053.33333
5053.33333/24=210.555556
That would mean I've spent over 210 days reading. I had a lot of words invade my brain with a lot of different authors spewing them. Your a really good author, and since I've read so much, that means your pretty talented. Even if you don't want to write anymore, at least finish your stories. You got fans who would love to see you works finish. If you need, get a beta to help out. Throw your ideas at em, get them to edit, and let them add their input an you'll be great.
4621484 I would but... Every time I think of something I like, I start to write it and change it. After I post it, I don't like it..
4648732 Dude trust me, I'm the same way. I can barely stand reading my own work, so I work on it. When my writing gets to the point that I can tolerate reading it without wanting to beat myself, then I know my work isn't half bad. After all, our hardest critic, is ourselves.
I think if you took some time and worked on your ideas so you enjoy it. A writers purpose is to not only please the crowd, but themselves as well.
I know my opinion doesn't mean much, but write down the base of you idea. Not anything more than the bare minimum. Once you have that written down, think of the different ways you could take your idea, and find which one you like the best. Write down where you want the story to go and begin writing. If you start changing from the plan, either begin again or incorporate it into the idea. Leave you mind open for change but keep yourself on track with the plan. Only write when you feel like it and never feel pressured into finishing something.
Do what you will, and if any of my writing tips work, than send me a message. Have fun.
Can't wait till the next chapter
Pinkie got to eat Twilight pretty early in this relationship.