Spike, has been living around the same six ponies for quite a while now. One of them has lived unaware of his blossoming feelings for her since he arrived in Ponyville with Twilight. What is it that brought him these feelings so quickly, and when they had just met? (Please, if you've read the story before I unpublished it, try it again. I've added much more to it than it held before.)
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It's cute, but it seems a bit rushed.
4232070 It was, in truth. I'm thinking of redoing the story, or at least revamping what I put up already.
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like I said it's good and cute, but as is, it's almost like a diamond in the rough. Little bit of fine tuning and polishing and you'll have yourself a real gem.
I'd do that
4232477 I really appreciate that, I'm going to work on it tonight.
hm... I'm not sure if you "revamped" it yet, but it's still, rather, really rushed and could use some touching up... but it was still an enjoyable read for what it was