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SilverCreep


Currently a University Graduate in English, wanting to improve my writing craft and just make some friends who have the same interests as me.

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Anon has been living a well solved life; he's got a decent job that gives him some income, some new social means, and of course, more people to call his friend.
Life was good, but, you can't always expect things to be forever in a good way.

On an everyday drive to his friends place, Anon is suddenly swept back into the magical world of Equestria where he finds his car is dead and must venture forth into the world he had once left behind. Being taken in by a band of traveling show-ponies, Anon is met by a mare who has been quite intrigued by his past dealings within the realm of Ponies, and instantly starts taking a deep liking to this human. However, once Anon returns to Ponyville, you find this mare wasn't very welcome in the town, and the insanity that ensured was enough to bring Celestia herself to quell the madness.

The Princess is delighted to see the return of the human. Overjoyed, she instantly seeks the chance to test his skill against her's once more and after yet another bout with the Princess, Anon is tasked with a very...unusual mission.

Recently, strife has befallen the neighboring griffon kingdoms, and several advisers who stationed themselves in Canterlot have stressed desire for the Equestrian's to intervene and assist with the situation. With Celestia tied with duties in Canterlot, she appoints Luna to be the royal envoy to travel to their disgruntled neighbor but she can't go alone. Therefore, by Celestia's decree, Anon and a few good friends are chosen to help the Princess of the night in this daunting task.

Many things left untied, and some old foes shall return to try at something all villains want, power.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 24 )

Holy shit a sequel thank Thor for this gift

I thought you had 3 MoM stories...what ever happened to the others?

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This is number 2, number 3 is started, but I want to finish this one.

2706153 Sorry... Its been a while since I read #1... Had to catch up. How is Cermina by the by?

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We'll touch on her in the following chapters, she's around, considering she didn't leave with Anon, she's been busy in Equestria but I won't spoil it.

2706234 Hmn....sounds fun...Grilled Cheese? I have another. *sends the Sammich*

Glad you made the squeal, and I'm sure your playing Trixie right.:twilightsmile:

Certainly keeping this sequel entertaining, but did he forget about his stuck SUV; like there was nothing in there he felt he shoulda brought with him in case he couldn't com back? :trixieshiftleft:

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All he had was his bag and coat, that's pretty much all he needs, though that SUV will eventually be how he has to return home so it will be touched on more towards the end. :rainbowdetermined2:

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I get yah, was just curious on how he treated SUV stuck in random terrain shift as par for the course and leaves with hardly any concern.......ignoring his past experiences with the random...:twilightsmile:

Trixie and Twilight sisters temporarily? ohhhhh! That will be so much fun to watch! :pinkiehappy:

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The reason the SUV just up and died is because for something that advanced, in that world were we've seen nothing to the capability of a combustion engine that the cars very nature of existance could break the fabric of reality. Considering these are magic ponies and that such technology as modern day SUV do not compute, the vehicle refuses to work as the motor and electroni functions cease entierly.

Coures, Anon will need the SUV to get home, he just has to find a way to power it.

Now that was a grate start to a story. I can't wait for the next chapter. Fums up on this story. javascript:smilie(':trollestia:'); He use the cell phone whit his gauntlet to expand the stuff it can do. Well his computer allow him to program new and better powers in the gauntlet? I can't wait to see the battle between Anon and Celestia. Well It seems that Celestia miss him more then she lets on. Is there possibly some love there that she wood show if she dared? You can see that Celestia has fillings for Anon. Whit that in mind and Anon being a knight, wood Celestia be testing him as possibly that one she wood be able to marry? It seems that all the barer of the elements of harmony have a liking or love of him. Trixie had a try in seducing Anon when they first met. Was that love or just because he was famous? She seems to be a lot nicer person with Anon help.There well be a lot of fun to see Trixie and Twilight to make nice to one another. Now that they can't move to far from one another, well Anon be the one that needs to step in to keep them from killing one another? It go wing to be lots and lots of fun to see the sparks fly. so keep up the good work make king this story.

Now that was a good chapter and I can see that Trixie is moving in the rite direction. She did not have the skills to make good friends with the way she acts with people. it seems that Anon is the key to Trixie change of hart. It seems that all the ponys love Anon in different ways. Well more ponys try suducing Anon? It well be fun to watch. Whit his bloods calmness ability, Anon Elemental Magic is like the elements of harmony, well it work with the elements of harmony? Did the Dragon of old give him the dragon blood or was he born whit it? Is Princess Celestia test is to bring out Anon ability's? I just wait to say, a good job on the story. I do hope to see more soon.

Guess that makes Cadance 'The Accidental Alicorn'. *Chuckles* (P.S. If anyone can correctly guess the reference, then You get 10 internets, a mustache, and a Fluffle...or Pony of Choice*

...Anon-chan....hehe-HAHAHAHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHEHEAHAHAHAHHHHAHAHAHAHAH....YOU JUST CALLED YOURSELF A GIRL! The term in question, being Onii-chan...not Anon-chan... hehe...*Can't stop chuckling!* -Chan is like -san, but in that it is a less formal way of speaking. -Chan has been used for most things that are cute, or have a very close connection to. Like a little girl will call her Teddy-Bear, Bear-chan. Most times, in youth, a boy will be referred to as -kun, while the girl is referred as -chan, until they are young adults, or teens, when they start using -san to refer to each other, and use -chan, to refer to those younger than they are or a cute toy.

On another note...Lots and lots of errors...You ever think of getting an editor? It seems like you need one....

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Ah....odd, I thought it said -chan was for boys, my mistake, and nothing a little fixing can do.

*`0nii chan` is someone else`s older brother and `nee chan` [onee chan] is older sister.
when referring to one`s own older brother `ani chan` is used and older sister is `ane chan`.*

As for editors, I've tried and hadn't received anyone willing to read through it, so unless you volunteer, I'll continue to do the work myself and go through it time after time fixing bits here and there.

2745518 that Ani-chan is by itself, -aniki is probably the best you'd come up with, but -aniki is usually for a younger brother referring to an elder brother... I don't know how it'd come across though....

I'd be happy to be your editor, I don't have much to do now, on hiatus, so it'd be a pleasure. Just send a copy to my email, shadowguardianlucifer39@gmail.com, and I'll fix it up. (Email was a while ago, and Its been a while since I've been able to get it up. About...5 years until a couple weeks ago, I did not use it.)

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You got Skype? Would much prefer it so we can communicate and send files.

wow! Now the time to have some fun. That was a grate chapter and I can't wait to see whit happens next. Keep up the grate work. I do hope to see a new chapter soon.

I love these stories, they are so damn good!

One of the best fan fics I've read yet. Still a little weird to read his name. Anonymouspoll. Would prefer a real character name but amazing story nonetheless! Keep it up and I hope to see the next chapter as soon as its ready! Also when he got his shoes he should have said " Hey vegeta! I just realized something! I can fly....."
Vegeta:"god...dammit nappa..."

Well that was a good start!
Anon and Trix having some of that "get to know ya".
Good job!:twilightsmile:

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