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I fooled you. I fooled you. I got horse stories. I got horse stories. I got all horse stories.

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Some fighters are celebrated in ballads, others have their names whispered by bandits as wretched curses across the desert winds and even more are remembered for the injustice they fought.

This one belches fire.

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Sweet, always like Spike-centered westerns.

Comment posted by Indigo Steel deleted Sep 28th, 2013

VERY well done! two shootin' claws up, and a :moustache: for good measure!

If you ever do a sequel, you should DEFINITELY do a scene like this:

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You say that like there's a whole genre of Spike western fics.

...Is there?

This the kind of thing I like, comedy, action, and Spike being a badass.:pinkiehappy::moustache:

Max

Oh god, this was genious... im crying tears of joy.... and laughter :rainbowlaugh:

This was more random than some fics tagged Random. I don't even know whether or not I should upvote (though I can't downvote, since the description should have made it clear what I was in for.)

That was... pretty surreal. I'm not sure what I was expecting going into this, but it wasn't that! It was a really enjoyable read, and I think it was a perfect little one shot.

A funny, interesting and exciting little adventure. Would have made an excellent episode in it's own right. Excellent work, you get a gold star!
-Lumino

Definitely one of the funniest things I've read in a while, excellent work!

"AJ always sneak off to the movie theater to catch"

Would always sneak, or always snuck.

"She took the first train she could talong with Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash."

along

Fido none to gently

too

Fido lost his balance and fell off the carriage when poprifle was shot straight out of his paws

when the pop rifle, or when his pop rifle

Twilight eventually broke out of the scuffled and ran to the side of the building.

scuffle
That was so good it should be an episode. It also happens to have come out on my birthday, so hurray for excellent timing! :pinkiehappy:
The action, dialogue and humor were all very fun and well paced, and the violence was handled in an appropriately cartoony manner. Superb!

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I really, really hope there is.
Thumbed up, faved and moustached. :moustache:

Popguns. Sheer genius. :moustache:

...where's the fun in making sense?
Sweet!

Fear not! My dim though trusted purple steed and my shootin' claws will save the day.:moustache:

On the downside, some of the writing was juvenile and clumsy, and there was a span of about one thousand words in which I spotted a mistake for each finger. I was considering adding this to the favorites of the account I use to favorite things I don't love quite as much as the stories favorited on this account. On the upside, the premise is awesome, there were plenty of cute, silly, funny moments, and I love how you described the train demolition scene. Highly amusing read.

...Spike grabbing Rover's poprifle and ammo pouch as he passed him.

Would've been funnier if he'd leaned to the right to grab a poprifle from the first dog they zipped past, leaned to the left to snatch an ammo pouch from the second one, and reached out to the right again with his stolen rifle to bop the third one on the head.

Out of all the stuff I've written, I've always felt like this one was the most "episodic" for some reason.

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