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Lenora Goff


To be written later

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Today is the day.

Rarity had made the perfect tuxedo to go with the perfect date. She has the perfect everything set up. All she's going to do is take a nap, then she's going to go talk to her friends about her plans. In her mind, there is nothing that could possibly make her change her mind.

Then the fire happens.

But even something like a fire won't change what Rarity knows she has to do. Spike has waited so long for her to say those words, she'll say them even if she has to say them from the hospital.

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3488208

Sad stories aren't for everyone, and this one is one that I thought would make a few people angry. But I had the idea and so I went with it.

3488338

At least that means you don't think it's bad enough to down vote. :rarity wink:

Also, sad feelings were most certainly the intention, so it's good to know I succeeded there. If you want a happier story, some parts of my other stories are happier. Haven't done a Sparity story, though.

3488377 As much as I don't like Sparity I can't help but feel sad for her. Hopefully Spike will get over his shock and go back to her.

3488901

I'm afraid it's complete. There's no more, it has ceased to be.

Everyone who wants an alternate ending to this please respond to this comment.

D48

That was very good, but ouch. :raritycry:

The only thing that makes sense to me based on his reaction is that Spike had not seen what happened to Rarity before this because he seems more shocked and confused than anything else, and I cannot see him being so shallow as to reject her for this. Yes he was initially captivated by her looks, but I for one feel like his attachment has gone deeper than that since then because Rarity is a wonderful pony even if she is more than a little bit high maintenance (although then again, I doubt it is much worse than Twilight and her books:twilightsheepish:). It seems to me like he retreated to the safe familiarity of the library to think about what happened and his feelings, but I fully expect him to come back once he has had time to digest what happened.

3490038

I guess the best part about an open ended ... err ... ending is that it leaves room for wondering and head canon.

D48

3490047 That it does.

Woah Spike, dude. Not cool.

3489249

It wouldn't be hated, but this is marked "Sad" remember. Not every story has a happy ending. Some could argue that Spikes affections are deeper than this, but it can also be argued that it was simply just that, attraction, not love.

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Case in point.

Spike is young, and young folk tend to throw words like "Love" around like they know what it really means, even when they don't, and in situations like this, throwing something like that around can break some valuable things

3493333

Thank you. You explain it much better than I could.

:raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry: You destroyed my dreams!

4139227

Then my day is complete. :raritywink:

Spikey is not a shallow fellow ,:moustache::raritystarry: :derpytongue2: Forced ending :rainbowwild::raritycry::pinkiesick::flutterrage::twilightangry2::ajbemused:

5152290
Spike isn't shallow? Explain then why he got all love-eyed over Twilight when her hair got changed to look like Rarity's?

5152893 He likes her mane?, Why just pick one episode? Green isn't her inspiration for excess with the dog & pony show manifestation secret color .:derpytongue2:

There's another story where Rarity gets hammered & Spike stays by her side till her vanity raises it's ugly head. more feels 'The price of generosity" does it true to Spikey:moustache::raritywink:

5153655

Inspiration Manifestation is a good case of him being a bad friend, actually, and being afraid of her not wanting to be around him if he told on her. He has a crush on Rarity and wants to be around her. Dog and Pony Show just shows him wanting to be her "knight in shining armor", which can be interpreted as containing his crush OR true love. The reason why I think that it is continuing the crush is because he shows a little more than an infatuation with her most of the time.

Remember, his focus generally seems to be how beautiful she is.

But this mostly delves into headcanon territory, and I should respect yours as much as I'd want you to respect mine. As such, we have both explained our points of view. If you would like to continue the discussion, we can. I just felt I should tell you that I'm not posting this in a "I'm right and you're wrong" sort of way. We both see Spike/Rarity in different lights, and that's okay.

5154919 Read your Rainbow dashs spike, Damn good ! Now I got to read the rest of your works !:pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh::yay::ajsmug::duck::moustache:

Was that Dashie being a sneak or oops it just happened ?:rainbowwild::moustache:

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