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darf


pony-writer/pornographer looking for work. old stories undeleted. i'm sorry. Patreon here

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Hmmm first! :rainbowlaugh: first time i've ever done that

Ok this will be interesting

Commence read. Already a few parts up.

Man, you're on a roll!

Im liking this so far :D

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epicly upgoated

well i certainly enjoyed that, a morning glory which was'nt awkward for once :D i'll be follwing you from now on!

Yay for more story based stuff!

Wow that was good:pinkiehappy:

The language was very varied and the pacing was good. The character feel just right (except maybe Fluttershy 'eeping' a little too much) and it was genuiningly heart warming. Have a like and a watcher.

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This... I like this. Definitely want to see more. Wasn't expecting to get as immersed as I did, so nice job. I like what you've done with the characters and the setting.

Only real note is that Flutters squeaks a bit too often.

Fluttershy seemed a bit too eepy, but I'm putting that to the fact she's a filly in this case. Which is good, adds an element of realism in here- I'd be pretty surprised if Fluttershy had grown up without becoming at least slightly less squeamish.

Otherwise, yes. Is good. FlutterDash is almost always approved of.

Spotted a spelling mistake in Chapter Two, but I am too lazy to find it for you.

Favorited. This is a damn good read.

Well that was..... Tramatic. poor FlutterShy:fluttercry::fluttercry:

Well this was intresting... MOAR!!:flutterrage::flutterrage:

(Joke) Alt. Title: Color Me Featured: Yet Another Flutterdash School Fiction

:rainbowlaugh: Fluttershy knocked somepony out!!!

Me gusta. I like this very much so far, especially the descriptions of Flutters and R.D 's personalities in college. Getting Fluttershy to knock that dude out was a nice touch as well. Keep up the good work!

I really love this.

Intimate pieces just strike a chord in me somewhere. I really like this, even though I don't feel as if it's the best thing you've ever done mechanically speaking (though, Forbidden Fruit really tickled that fancy for me anyways).

A very good story :twilightsmile: NOW MORE READING :pinkiecrazy:

Daaaaaaammmnnnnnnnnn! :rainbowlaugh:

I DEMAND MOAAAR!!! :flutterrage:
Seriously though, amazing work. You did the characters justice. Can't wait to see the next chapter! :twilightsmile:

It's weird how this is another ship of to main characters but reading this just tells me that you can write anything you want, as long as you write it awesomely. Just saying.

That was the best thing i ever read. I was amazed when, little harmless fluttershy, JUST KO'ED A GUY!:rainbowlaugh:

4?! WHAT? i know at least one hased to sit out....rite?:twilightoops:

>Flutterdash
>multipart
>written by darf

i fucking love you

Commence read.

Now to see what Fluttershy attempts to do.

Yet another case of Fluttershy being too bloody timid and Dash being utterly oblivious.

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Crazy drunken sex at the party? No... That won't work. Perhaps being teased as being lesbians? Possible.

You have me looking forward to the next chapter!:rainbowwild:

this is one massive tease....I love it!

Things are gonna get complicated for those two real quick.

Such an adorable and cute wake up scene~ and ooh-la-la, fluttershy fantasizing about dashie in a french maid outfit? I like her style~<3 D'aww, Fluttershy's so cute when she overthinks things like what to say to Dash when she's leaving. Nice subtle shift to Dash's perspective; I had to re-read that paragraph to realize that the "view" had changed, but I like it =D

Ooooooooooh I can't wait until the "hour before the party" and I'm torn between the concept of a heavily intoxicated Rainbow Dash (and possibly fluttershy) or the possiblity that they might forgo the party in lieu of a more romantic encounter <3

you never fail to impress darf :fluttershyouch::rainbowwild:

:rainbowkiss: D'awwwwwww. This story is so cute. I'm not really sure it needs the mature tag buuuut what do I know. On the whole, keep up the good work. :twilightsmile:

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it might not yet, but it's getting there

4 stallions in a world where 1/5th of the population is male.... Fluttershy's mom has got it going on.....

Well darf, you did it again with another fantastic story. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Bravo Zulu

Hurry and add the next chapter:)

:yay::rainbowwild: <= This. Make it happen at the party.

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