The language was very varied and the pacing was good. The character feel just right (except maybe Fluttershy 'eeping' a little too much) and it was genuiningly heart warming. Have a like and a watcher.
This... I like this. Definitely want to see more. Wasn't expecting to get as immersed as I did, so nice job. I like what you've done with the characters and the setting.
Only real note is that Flutters squeaks a bit too often.
Fluttershy seemed a bit too eepy, but I'm putting that to the fact she's a filly in this case. Which is good, adds an element of realism in here- I'd be pretty surprised if Fluttershy had grown up without becoming at least slightly less squeamish.
Otherwise, yes. Is good. FlutterDash is almost always approved of.
Spotted a spelling mistake in Chapter Two, but I am too lazy to find it for you.
Intimate pieces just strike a chord in me somewhere. I really like this, even though I don't feel as if it's the best thing you've ever done mechanically speaking (though, Forbidden Fruit really tickled that fancy for me anyways).
It's weird how this is another ship of to main characters but reading this just tells me that you can write anything you want, as long as you write it awesomely. Just saying.
Wow, according to everyone else who's here... I feel like that this is just a basic FlutterDash storyline (Mainly because this is the first I've read so far, but idk).... Is that good.
Anyways, a job well done my good man. *Favs* Keep up the awesome work.
Hmmm first! first time i've ever done that
Ok this will be interesting
Commence read. Already a few parts up.
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Man, you're on a roll!
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well i certainly enjoyed that, a morning glory which was'nt awkward for once :D i'll be follwing you from now on!
Yay for more story based stuff!
Wow that was good
The language was very varied and the pacing was good. The character feel just right (except maybe Fluttershy 'eeping' a little too much) and it was genuiningly heart warming. Have a like and a watcher.
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I like it
This... I like this. Definitely want to see more. Wasn't expecting to get as immersed as I did, so nice job. I like what you've done with the characters and the setting.
Only real note is that Flutters squeaks a bit too often.
Fluttershy seemed a bit too eepy, but I'm putting that to the fact she's a filly in this case. Which is good, adds an element of realism in here- I'd be pretty surprised if Fluttershy had grown up without becoming at least slightly less squeamish.
Otherwise, yes. Is good. FlutterDash is almost always approved of.
Spotted a spelling mistake in Chapter Two, but I am too lazy to find it for you.
Favorited. This is a damn good read.
Well this was intresting... MOAR!!
(Joke) Alt. Title: Color Me Featured: Yet Another Flutterdash School Fiction
This is very good
MOAR!
I really love this.
Intimate pieces just strike a chord in me somewhere. I really like this, even though I don't feel as if it's the best thing you've ever done mechanically speaking (though, Forbidden Fruit really tickled that fancy for me anyways).
I DEMAND MOAAAR!!!
Seriously though, amazing work. You did the characters justice. Can't wait to see the next chapter!
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It's weird how this is another ship of to main characters but reading this just tells me that you can write anything you want, as long as you write it awesomely. Just saying.
>Flutterdash
>multipart
>written by darf
i fucking love you
Wow, according to everyone else who's here... I feel like that this is just a basic FlutterDash storyline (Mainly because this is the first I've read so far, but idk).... Is that good.
Anyways, a job well done my good man. *Favs*
Keep up the awesome work.
Pretty great so far Mr. Writer. I keep being introduced to these stories when they seem to have run their course, sadly.