When the spirit of Nightmare Moon visits Spike in his dreams, she presents to him everything a mortal could ask for; wealth, power...mares. After being shown the possibilities of what could be, will the young dragon still be able to repel her nocturnal advances? Or will he accept her offers, bending a knee?
How he proceeds is up to you.
[Hint; It's Interactive]
Also, I'm going to keep the 'Dark' on the light side, so don't you worry about things getting...heinous. It's just not my style.
Chapters (7)
What happens if he eats both? Diception
He should have just, put the helmet on.Turn to her, and say "What will you have you're Warrior do?" Like the Arbiter
Insta fave, Im gonna enjoy this one a lot
2000278 I was expecting the same thing XD
2012658>>2000171
Thanks guys! Your thoughts are much appreciated, and I'm glad for the positive feedback!
This is gonna be fun
this story seriously needs to get out, try putting commedy and dark tags, since this story will take a turn for both sides depending on what you choose, and since commedy and dark are very popular you will get enough feedback and critiques to motivate yourself more and to be more creative =D, just ignore haters and/or trolls XD
2014960 A fine proposal, but I'm aiming not to make it so dark as to warrant the "Dark" tag.
Edit: Then again, if things do turn for the worse, I suppose we'll see what happens!
*clicks new tab*
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Where the buck is the '1000' thumbs i'm expecting
2052396 You & me both, brother!
But, as the saying goes, "Good things come to those who wait."
2052953
true, but it's the first time i'm sad over lack of views. This is a really good story
2052963 I suppose I'll have to take what I can get at the moment. After all, I don't have nearly the amount of followers as some of the other literary titans on fimfiction.
They're like cult leaders for Celestia's sake!
For now I'll update every Sunday/Monday, and hopefully this'll go places!
2052977
no to be mean but... i reached 68 thumb's and 123 faves in five hours, and stumble upon this story that turns out to be way better than anything i've ever made
2052991 Oh don't say that!
If there's anything I learned from this website, it's that some genres of fiction are significantly more popular than others, therefore leading to a wider audience. Then, on the other hand, it's about lucky timing and the right people being on at the right time.
I like to think stories revolve around the luck theory, so I roll along with the tide, hoping my hook catches the attention of others. Take you, for example. You're taking the time to comment, so that means I've touched (Theoretically) at least one person.
Plus, writing is what makes me feel good, so attention from others is only a bonus!
And thanks for the supporting words, it inspires me to keep this story going!
2053027
i.... if you were planning on leaving the story halfway through i would come after you
2053042 Oh heavens no, not when I've invested a week & a half into it haha! That's like three months in dog years!
2053048
,'' okay just curios, look's up in thought ''just wondering, what was your inspiration on this fic
''phew'' lays down sniper
2053084 A dash of imagination, an appreciation for Spike, two cups of curiosity over dreams/unconsciousness, and a smidgen of interest in the "Monster" that is Nightmare Moon.
Mix thoroughly, add some eggs, heat at 450 Deg. and....BAM! This story!
2053110
i can't help but ask, are you pinkiepie
2053122 Wouldn't that make an interesting story to tell the grand-kids!
But alas, I'm more human than 99 cent McDonald's cheeseburgers on a Wednesday.
And that's saying something.
2053143
i know, but for your information i'm younger than you
2053151 Fear not, dear godf0006, uncle Octave's got everything all figured out!
And by everything, I mean barely anything. But hey, apples to apples, right?
2053161
true, by the way uncle octave, what do you plan to do now, i mean your mate and kids are going to look at you wierd when they see a man above the age of 18 is writing pony fiction
2053183 I guess they'll be in for a real shock when they find out I'm only seventeen (And a half!) then hahaha!
2053196
from the wain you're writing i can tell you're enjoying confusing me with your squitty wave of writing, wanna coin in a epic pun battle.
2053215 Punny you should say that. Play-on-words battles are my favorite way to pass the time!
What's the subject?
2053242
food and toys, think you can cake it
I think I'm up to the challenge. But, before I begin the attack, I'm giveing you one last chance to just lego and accept defeat.
2053255 I'm a bit of a flan myself, my friends actually think a bit of a fruit cake to be honest, but I tell them there are hundreds and thousands of us out there, and having others enjoy it is just the frosting on the cake. I just don't like 'ecclers....A crumby start, but no doubt the puns will get a beating as we whisk our way through.
2053287 Cheese, you're really making it hard for me to ketchup with you. Clearly, this was a mis-steak trying to compete!
2053335 As far as pun threads go, this takes the biscuit. Yes I know ....... it ain't cake , but I can't hold a candle to the rest of you people, my Woodies jokes is a lie i can't saber you,crust me, you're icing on the ship.
2053361 Alright, it's clear now. I doughnut belong here. Asta la feast-a baby!
2053378 Layer off, mate. You only get out what you pudding. I din't want to defeat your honer as i can see you can match my goose, but it's time to end this Pinkie, please don't whip as i win, you can cream with me if you want, lives a joystick, let cart out some fun.
2053399 Alright, I surrender! You win this round, buddy!
This has been great, but I need to get back to work on a model of the Lusitania (Ship that was sunk by Germans that brought U.S. into WWI) for tomorrow haha!
Until the next chapters, it's been real.
~Tropical Octave
2053423 You'd have to be simnel to forget to put marzipan on your cake. But if you get constant advice in the kitchen when you do, just say that's a bit rich, you're nuts and I wish I'd never dated you. You really are taking the Swiss.
After all, there's only so mocha you can take. sea ya, but the next time don't sushi out, okay.
I was thinking of The Martix when I read the this...I like it!
Really, without any further choices, you could just have the lines as two separate stories...
2060937 That'd be making it FAR too easy...It's practically cheating if I do that!
Very interesting...
When New Chaper Come´s Out
This Is The Firts Spike And Nightmare Moon Fanfic I See Beacuse This Two Guys Rock
Nightmare seems pretty... cruel.
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Nice to see another Dishonored fan.
I'm guessing this is a dead story?