A bizarre vortex has taken shape over the Everfree and strange ponies are appearing throughout it's confines. In the eyes of the public the ponies seem completely normal, they walk, talk, and eat just like the rest of us. But something about their visions they claim to have had before awaking is...offsetting, not to mention the fact that they just seem to appear out of thin air.
More concerned with the sudden appearances than their friends, Twilight Sparkle, Spike, Fluttershy and Angel Bunny must find out why these mysterious ponies are appearing and where they're coming from, risking it all in a quest for the truth.
Unfortunately the truth isn't always meant to be uncovered, and the Everfree is determined to prevent it from surfacing.
Chapters (1)
Well, here it is. The start of one of my most ambitious literary undertakings.
Also, my FIRST literary undertaking.
So with that being said...Go or No-Go?
982094 We meet again....
Well, maybe too early to say for sure, but I like it. I'm bookmarking it (never figured out the watchlist or whatchamacallit).
982293 I would like to say so! I figured after months of browsing through stories on this illustrious website, that I finally throw my hypothetical hat into the ring lol
Hope it turns out somewhat okay
982318
...What does that have to do with remembering you commenting on some trollfic?
982326 Not much, but I remember that I gave healthy advice to the young friend who wrote it
982331 You said he was 14....I've seen 13-year-olds write better material than that.
982335 Indeed I did, for he stated within his story that he was. (supposedly anyway) So I figured i'd give him some encouragement
Hey, just wanted to say you have a few slight errors. Most of which are i'm instead of I'm, but also when describing the number of times that fluttershy has heard thunder she says "fifth." Then Twilight asks "fourth time?" Little confusing may wanna clear that up.
982445 Whew, I'm glad those are the only mistakes, and thanks for letting me know
For you see, I don't have an editor other than myself so I guess mistakes were bound to happen eventually lol
Also, thanks for reading!
982465 interesting I shall track
Kool
Planning to update?
1555849 Now that I think of it, Incomplete is a funny way to spell 14 week hiatus lol. I suppose it's time to dust off the old keyboard...
And yes, this will be coming back to life
Time to take FimFiction by storm!
1564583 Hurray!