This is Heaven

by Discord Kantus

Twilight's Perspective

IMPORTANT! HAVE YOU READ FLUTTERSHY'S PERSPECTIVE? IF NOT, IT IS HIGHLY RECCOMENDED THAT YOU READ IT FIRST, AS THEY ARE INTENDED TO BE READ IN THAT ORDER.

I was curled up on the couch, reading a book as usual. It had been a nice, peaceful day, and Spike was off in Canterlot on royal business, so I had had the library to myself. Spending the day relaxing and reading had been a great idea, as I'd been working my cutiemark off the day before. If only she were here, this could be even better than it already is.

My thoughts were interrupted by a knock at the door. Celestia, if you have heeded my request for Fluttershy to arrive, then I will be even more in your debt than I already am. Upon looking out the door through the peephole to see who had chosen to come so late at night, I found that Celestia had indeed heard me. Fluttershy was at the door, expectantly waiting for me to open it. My cheeks turned scarlet as I imagined why she might be here at this hour.

Is now the time? I thought to myself. Could now be the perfect moment for me to tell her? The images of all the possibilities floated through my head, yet three stuck out to me. One, she admits to me that she loves me as well, and I go into ecstacy. Two, she says she doesn't feel the same way, and I skulk back into my room, crying a lot. Three, she laughs at me and tells me fillyfoolers are evil, and I skulk back to my room, crying so much that I literally drown in my own tears, death bringing me peace after the trauma of the previous encounter with the most beautiful pony in Equestria.

I shook myself out of the trance and opened the door. Pretending those thoughts hadn't run through my mind, I put on a bright smile and opened the door wider. "Fluttershy! Come in!" Fluttershy gladly stepped through the door, although for a split second I thought I saw a slightly annoyed expression on her face, and she ruffled her wings a bit.

"I... came to tell you something," Fluttershy whispered.

That alone was all it took to make me nearly faint. Her voice. It was heavenly, like what I imagine an angel would sound like if they existed. "What is it you need to tell me?" I managed to gasp out after several seconds.

However, Fluttershy appeared to have stopped listening to me. She was staring at something, a dreamy expression on her face. Following her gaze led me to my flank, specifically the center of my cutiemark. Could she be eyeing me up? No, of course not. "Fluttershy, are you all right?"

"What? Oh, yes, I'm fine, Twi." Fluttershy seemed nevous, scared even. After taking a deep breath, she finally was able to say what she came to tell me. "I'm... I'm... Twi, I'm... I'm a... I... I'm a... fillyfooler..." Fluttershy nearly began to crawl backwards, but she stopped when I smiled again.

If I had been any more confident, smile is the least I would have done. I would have jumped for joy. This improved my chances with her tremendously, to know that she liked mares. As it was, all I said was, "It's fine, Fluttershy. There is nothing wrong with that. Anyone who thinks there is happens to be an idiot."

"I've been... I've known this for quite a while. For around a year, now. Ever since I... met someone..."

My heart began to race at this point. I've known you for about a year, Flutters. Please please please please please, say it's me. "Who was it?"

"It... was you..."

Despite my utmost hopes that she would say those very words, I still believed I had not heard her right. Fluttershy must have caught on to that, as she continued talking instead of waiting for my reaction. ""Ever since I met you, I've had this strange... feeling... whenever you're around, I feel all warm inside of me... being near you, it... it's strange, it turns me on, even..." At this point, Fluttershy unfurled her wings, showing they had been erect this entire time.

Images flashed through my mind: Me and Fluttershy kissing, Fluttershy gently stroking my mane, us... doing something in a bed... yet once one thing popped up in my mind, I couldn't get it out. What was it about pegasi with erect wings... It was about not keeping them furled, or else they- NOT KEEPING THEM FURLED! Being intimate with Fluttershy could wait for a few minutes; now I was in full on scholar mode.

"Flutters, how long were you holding your wings back when they were...um... like that?"

"They erected right when I came in, Twilight. You are truly that beautiful to me."

As much as Fluttershy's comment about my beauty made me want to simply hug her right then, scholar mode had taken full control, and I couldn't remove that now. "No, you're not okay! You might not be able to fly for days! There is only one way to help you..." My voice trailed off as I remembered what that "one way" happened to be. If I had wings, they would have been firmer than Fluttershy's at this point.

"Twi..."

"Flutters, you have to believe me here. Just do what I say and you'll be fine. Lie down." I realize now what it sounded like I was asking her to do, but I was in scholar mode then, and only doing what made sense from a completely scientific point of view.

"Oh, su- wait, what?" Fluttershy was apparently thinking something similar. Sure enough, though, she chose to lie down, her legs splayed out at her sides.

Full-on scholar mode dissapated as I began the procedure of wing massage. My hooves lightly rubbed her wings until I felt that they had been fully worked on, at which point I almost stopped, but I rather wanted to continue. It was so nice... Fluttershy seemed to be enjoying this too, smiling brightly and mumbling about how much she loved me. She only became even more elated when I continued the massage onto her back.

As much as I tried to remind myself that I was only doing this to help Fluttershy, I couldn't help but feel like I was feeling her up. Every contour of her body was slowly being rubbed by my hooves, and I couldn't have been happier. Her body was smooth and warm, matching her creamy color. I rather wanted to simply say buck the massage and lay my head on Fluttershy's body, and knew that she wouldn't mind; but finishing the massage was the first thing on my mind.

Even so, as my hooves neared her flank, I began to get exceedingly nervous. What if she is sensitive to other ponies touching her flank? Nothing I've done so far has been truly sexual. I was really only fooling myself on that last thought, as I had been pretty much trying to feel her body as much as possible. Well, here goes nothing.

As my hooves gave the first quick run of her flank, Fluttershy's head drooped and her breathing steadied. Nervously, I looked at her face, only to see a slight smile played across her lips. My relief was immeasurable, as was my joy. I returned my focus to massaging her flank as much as possible.

Fluttershy's flank was even more warm and soft than the rest of her was. The curves in it were all in the right spots, the size perfect. Twice, I lay my head down on it, feeling its warmth against my cheek. When I did this, Fluttershy mumbled in her sleep and her already erect wings would firm up slightly more.

I gazed at Fluttershy once again. Her body was perfect. Her beautiful pink mane hung over her face like a veil, masking her wonderful features. The cream-colored coat she wore was lovely. She murmured my name several times in her sleep. "Twilight... Twilight..." Slowly, one eye opened on her face, then the other.

Quickly, I went back to massaging her. I pretended I was massaging her whole body, but really I was only concentrating on her flank.

"How long was I out?" she asked.

"Only a few minutes," I answered. "You didn't miss much."

"Miss much?" I was about to hesitantly explain to her that she missed me lying down on her flank when Fluttershy's stomach grumbled. She blushed and hid underneath her mane in the cutest way imaginable.

"Do you want something to eat?" I asked.

"What was that?" she asked. "I didn't hear you."

"I asked if you wanted something to eat."

"Oh- well..."

"I mean, if your wings are feeling better now. Are they?" Fluttershy smiled at me.

"My wings... they're fine. A lot better now." Fluttershy was barely able to move her wings at all, as she showed me, but I decided to trust her.

"But... sure, I am rather hungry..."

I slowly walked into the kitchen, feeling Fluttershy's gaze follow my flank as I did. Because of this, I decided to appease her. I swayed my hips slightly, trying to make it look as appetizing as I possibly could. Judging by her sigh of ecstacy, I'm guessing I succeeded.

I opened my fridge and brought out two daffodil sandwiches. Fluttershy seemed glad that those were the food in question, although I'm not sure why. I sat down at the table and levitated my sandwich over to Fluttershy's place.

Suddenly, I was struck by a strange thought. Perhaps if I... Deciding to follow through on it, I also brought down a couple of candles from the top of my shelf. Considering Fluttershy's gasp of joy, I guessed that it was a good idea. As I sat down and began to eat, I started staring into Fluttershy's beautiful blue eyes. She stard back as we began to eat, but then glanced backwards. I quickly followed her gaze to see she was looking at a couch in the main room, but she almost instantly turned and looked back at me. Suddenly, her eyes drifted away from mine, and her mouth began to hang open. She almost began to drool before I stopped her and she suddenly went back to eating. I realized what she was thinking. She wanted to be on the couch, with me.

I was naturally excited, and hoped that we would end up there before the night ended. As we finished our sandwiches, I asked Fluttershy, "So, Fluttershy, is there anything else you'd like to do before we go to bed?" I attempted to put an accent on the word bed so that she would understand that I was thinking the same thing she was.

"Yes, there is one thing..."

"Yes, what is it?"

Fluttershy jumped towards me and wrapped her hooves around my waist before bringing her lips in contact with my own. I instantly returned the actions, and before I knew it, we were somehow right by the couch, lips still touching. Fluttershy fell over onto the peice of furniture, and I followed suit, knowing what was to come.

As we began doing what everypony does, a single thought jumped up in my mind, again and again : I'm in heaven.

Comments

[raw19]

I found chapter 2 to be just as interesting as the 1st. I always enjoy different perspectives. sweet story.

[FlyingMushroomxii]

It's good...

[Discord Kantus]

2076219 Not one thing you can complain about? Come on, look harder! You can do better than that!

[FlyingMushroomxii]

2076226 Well I don't support the ship, it was not very exciting, and seriously, her butt.

[Discord Kantus]

2085500 It's a ship. Is it supposed to be exciting? Also, I made both characters fanatically obsessed with the other's flank so I wouldn't have to give it a mature rating when they were fanatically obsessed with other parts of the other character's body.

[ShotgunNeko]

I read this story awhile ago and didn't realize you were the author...fave and up vote from me my friend!

[Pidgeons]

In the beginning of the first chapter, Fluttershy's narration was much too verbose to be Fluttershy. It's like an actor who doesn't know Fluttershy very well paraphrasing her lines. I'm not saying she wouldn't have that kind of vocabulary in her memory banks, it just isn't characteristic for her to talk the way the narration does in her perspective, so it didn't seem quite like Fluttershy. Some aspects did, however, and the whole problem ended up fixing itself anyway and she sounded more and more like Fluttershy.

I love that you put the same event in both ponies's perspectives. Sometimes a character's reaction to things comes off as 'following along', and not only does putting the same event in both their perspective fix that problem, but it also removes what would have been annoying ambiguity of the nature of their actions.
For instance, if Twilight's "bed" line had remained in Fluttershy's perspective only, the ambiguity of what she actually meant would have drove me nuts.

It's also nice to see characters in a romance show sexual attraction toward each other outside of clop. People always cry "it's gotta be about the emotions, all about the emotions, feelings don't need to be sexual in any way in a romance"....blah blah, horsecrap. Too often stories will reduce the 'romance' to a very close friendship, because the writer is too timid to show feelings that don't necessarily have to do with love, because they're afraid it cheapens the love...or something. I don't know. But we already know Twilight and Fluttershy are friends. It doesn't take much to establish they love each other, and despite sexual and romantic feelings being seperatel in nature (and indeed should not be confused with each other), there's nothing wrong with feeling both love and sexual desire simultaneously. I love the fact that both Twilight and Fluttershy can't keep their eyes (and in Twilight's case, hooves) off each other's flanks, and that the story ends on a note that it's clearly obvious they're going to buck right then and there.

Awesome.

[Discord Kantus]

2346401 Thanks for the help! This was the most descriptive advice I've been given yet. Also, no clop because damn, I hate clop.

[Pidgeons]

Help? I don't remember giving any advice. o.o Just praising the shit out of.......oh, right. the beginning Fluttershy vocab. Forgot about that. I'm a forgetful pony.

Anyway I don't like clop either. I thought I would, once, 'cause I'm a perv and I want the characters to buck like rabbits. But clop is....disgusting. It's like clop writers go out of there way to make sex as unrealistically disgusting as they can imagine.

I mean, does EVERY kiss have to end in a thick saliva bridge? That's way too easy to avoid...and so gross! Jeezo.

[Discord Kantus]

2733188 Did you like it?

[TwilightRealm919]

Hey this is nothing, but amazing. That is the only word I can use to describe it. Keep Going!!!

[Discord Kantus]

3488371 There must be something I can improve upon.

[heartbrokenpariah]

This is a well written story. Have a thumbs up :).

[Discord Kantus]

3732520 No chance you could find every single miniscule flaw and tell me in detail about every single one so I can avoid making any in my next story?

[Father Mordteiva]

3732587
Instead of worrying about your mistakes, worry only about what you will do next. if a mistake is found except it, find it and rethink that spot only to improve it. otherwise pay it no mind

[Discord Kantus]

3914017 That's what I'm doing. I'm just going out of my way to find said mistakes.

[randomsurprise]

that was simply adorable n' i liked both perspectives of t girls

[Discord Kantus]

4252887 Thanks.

[randomsurprise]

4255557
Ur welcome

[bronyvamp]

awesome story

[Discord Kantus]

4399461 Oh, really? How many words did it take? Also, there's a sequel if you're interested. Only one chapter is done, however, and it's a clop, so...