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DiscoDash


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well this was a disapointment.....it had potential unless your continuing or sumthing

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If I could see a way, I would. But I don't see a good way to advance on a story where the protagonist is dead... That is, unless you want me to make "The beginning" or something. This WAS made as a one shot for the AiE threads...

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oh then i guess it was good while it lasted it would be better if he survived and at least try and repent for his sin instead of taking the easy road to hell
but i digress hope you make more fics lookin forward to reading them in the futur if you do.

I don't care how, whether it be he just magically wakes up or something, this can't be the end. I just finished reading several stories in a row hoping for a good ending but most of them ended badly, come on! Give us a good ending please!

Could do something like Luna brings him back as one last chance or something, I don't know.

So... Given a second chance, but after a year of not saying anything, he decides to talk, is met with disbelief... She left him alone for a few minutes and BANG. :pinkiecrazy: Rainbow is now traumatized, as would be all of his friends... Would be interesting to see a follow up on their conditions afterword.

TLP

1837091 1. Give permission to someone to continue this.

2. Do it yourself.

sad story but at the same time interesting and well written. good job👍:twilightsmile:

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