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Liquid_Rainbows


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Thanks for that, it was awesome!

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But in all seriousness, I liked it.
Simple. But that's how a clopfic is supposed to be.

>Implying that I know how clopfics should be.

Wait... SUNNY Days? As in THE Sunny Days? The Sunny Days who F*CKED Celestia!?!?!? And he's a general now? What. The. F*ck.

As M.Bison would put it:

Ohoho, THIS IS DELICIOUS! YEEESSSSHH! YEEESSSHHH!

Though the pace is a little fast.

Another Great Clopfic with my Favourite Pony this time :twilightsmile: Thanks and can't wait for more

Brilliant!
Sunny Days must be the luckiest stallion in equestria, though I wonder where he will go from here.

...Damn, that guy gets around.

Lulz yes

I used to be a cadet, but then Celestia took me in the plot. Now I'm a general, my days spent wondering when I get my next piece of royal tang.

Celestia clops to this?
Now you KNOW liquid rainbow is good!

... Why was Celestia watching them? I can't be the only one worrying about that.
Very good story. Well written.

Celly is now a bit of a creeper - me gusta!

I wonder how Sunny is going to top this badassery?

Maybe he'll strangle a T-rex with his bare hooves whilst flying atop a black hole... or something...

:heart: Excellent story :heart:

Great next thing we know, Sunny will be fucking The Elements of Harmony...now that would be the LUCKEST FUCKING STALLON EVER!

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Now that's an idea!

Another amazing job as always :pinkiehappy:

Hm... So I just have to take a bunch of coins and throw them into the screen while shouting 'OMG THIS IS AWESOME!', right?
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...Screw it, didn't work. So I'll just give it a 5/5 stars. :pinkiehappy:

That guy....luckiest stallion ever...if getting laid by celestia boosted his confidence a bit and made him general what's getting laid by Luna gona do for his self esteem...make him superman?

HOT-DAMN! Over 40 people reading this at the same time i was, and its 5am. Congrats on another featured story. That sunny days (again with the actual sunny days, as you may remember my comment on your other fic :twilightsheepish: ) is one lucky bastard. Keep up the good work

Well damn, Sunny Days is a general, now that he's had both the princesses, how's he gonna get another promotion?
Looks like Celestia's gonna have to invent a new position for him, may I suggest Royal Sex Machine? :raritywink:

...And then Sunny was promoted supreame leader of the lunar guard.

I fount a mistake. "...not sure how vocalize what she felt". It should say "how to vocalize...". Other than that, great job!

How to fuck both goddesses within a years time:

Be shy as fuck with no self esteem.

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Anyway, daaaem that was fun to read. 5/5 from me sir!

I can't tell you all how thankful I am. You are some of the best, funniest, and nicest readers I've ever seen! :raritystarry:

this is crazy good. How do you do it?

He became a General in a single year? He had better have led the entire army during a major battle because the general had been shot. There's no way in hell that would happen in reality.

I'm pretty sure that i should be disgusted. I think this goes against everything sacred in mlp.
Ah, fuck it *clop clop clop*
5/5! Awesome story!

Yay! Another quality story from Liquid_Rainbows! :heart:

Sunny Day's check list:
Clestia (\
Luna (\
Mane 6
.... what? It could happen :trollestia:

Oh my, and in the gardens too xD
Daym, Sunny is one lucky buck! I wonder if he's now the go-to-stallion if either of them needs some... relieving xD

Oh shit, I'm scared to read this.
I don't think I can

good sir i enjoyed this story i admit that sunny day's is a lucky stallion but i wish that you make 6 other stories like this but with the main cast

if you know what i mean, if not just make him a even lucker stallion

I can't believe people are asking for another sequel. Hey, I guess there's always a chance it could happen! :raritywink:

Fry

Its Awesome no words to describe it :D

And the whole time, Celestia just watched... creepy Celestia!:trollestia:

BEST EXPLINATION FOR A CERTIAN LINE?
"Oh, Buck it" *Secks*
XD

I enjoyed this, but that's besides the point. Plot-wise, it's awefully rushed, and there is no character development. You could have really built more on Clestia's manipulating horse-breeding skills, I mean, their little talk in the beginning? Luna asked her for advice, Celestia said "buck a guard", and then Luna bucked a guard. Now reading this again that sounds more awesome than I intended it to sound. Anyway, the point is: sexy, but it could have been more sexy with a little more depth. Depth is important.

A lot already pretty much summed it up, but... sexy. Although more rushed in comparison to the "prequel", I think I enjoyed this one more.

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Discord perhaps?

The only way a sequel could top this... I think... is if it involves multiple members of the mane six at the same time. Maybe. Just throwing that out there. :raritywink:

woa son what is this
it is gay

stop the gay

on the other hand u get a 5/5 for making me not boners
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Once again, nice job man. Keep it up.

Damn, a lot of people just one starred. Whatever, thanks to everyone who liked it! :pinkiehappy:

I dont think any ruler would bump a recruit to general in a year just because of the sex. Move them to the nearest cushy position near you, yes but not power promote them.

...His junk must have a real commanding prescence to warrant the power promotion. Leading his men with his head that gets ahead. He really makes sure that his soldiers have their helmets on before diving into the battle field. So is he in charge of the spearmen, the riflemen, or the heavy artillery? (Im sorry about that, the comment kind of begged for military related double entendre. I'll sto- oh wait!) Celestia and Luna's favorite little general! (Okay Im done).

Aside from the odd promotion schedule, it was a fun fic.

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