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Friendly Uncle


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I really enjoyed this story the first time I read it. :pinkiehappy:

This is the best story. Ever. Moreover, it's canon.

Oh, I adore this one.

And here I was waiting, now I can hop around in a circle going "Yesyesyesyesyes..."

Gold. Genius. Grandiose. And plenty other G-words.

"Luna, forget everything I just told you and go grab a couple of my guards. We need to get you laid."

Motherfucking classic.

935663 Quite. It's no wonder Mr. Talon made this story canon.

And not a single fuck was given that night

this one NEVER fails when it comes to making me laugh my face off:pinkiehappy:

oh dear god why....

No matter how many times I reread it, it never fails to entertain. Classic.

:rainbowlaugh:

935686 Actually, this is not exactly true...

:rainbowlaugh: awesome story! i can't stop laughing!

Now...why am I always online when you upload stories, you Friendly Uncle you?:applejackunsure:

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I'm just that friendly. :rainbowkiss:

i wondered when this was going to come over to this site :pinkiehappy:
always happy to read a Progress offshoot :heart:

One of my personal favorites! :rainbowlaugh:

935555

So there are follow-ups that reference this story?

Now in one of my top ten favorite story's of all time just out of the genuine laughter

Almost forgot! When can we expect the sequel where Twilight and friends have a 'movie night' and Pinkie gets her hooves on that octopus for her next party? *hint hint* :trixieshiftright:

Priceless. :pinkiehappy:

And dare I say you got the potential emotional complications almost spot on. Even while you made me laugh my @ss off.

Right up there with “grab a couple of my guards” is the following.

“... I still can’t move my hind legs.”

“Me neither.”

I was grinning like Pinkie by the end of it *fav'ed*

Awesome! Excellently funny. Had me startling everyone else in the house at irregular intervals! Very well done. Take my thumb. Take it with fave.
Please keep writing, I'll keep reading!

Hoyden Cheered.

And so did I.

"HOY!"


-Delta-

By the great Pink One :pinkiegasp:
read this a long while back, didn't know you were the one who wrote it.

you just became more awesome in my book :pinkiehappy:

1.This story is the most awesome thing I have ever read.
2. I have become a better man after reading this story.
3. The story is awesome, and you should feel awesome.
I have spoken.

Ah! A classic revisited!
We hath enjoyed our nocturnal pleasures of the herd.
We... we think it shall need to happen again. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png

Very very good, now, write us a version with clop in it. Justify that mature tag. :pinkiehappy: I kid I kid. :pinkiecrazy: No really do it.

story was :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: but there was no clop in this story:twilightangry2: the hints where there but... this story didn't need the mature tag :ajbemused:

this was really good or great or some other synonym for good, im to tired to think but i still enjoyed it

i laughed my ass of at this line :rainbowlaugh:
:trollestia: "Luna, forget everything I just told you and go grab a couple of my guards. We need to get you laid."

Speaking of the tags though... Mature rating this does not fit. Beating the heat is far worse in innuendo. Rerate it to teen. You are crippling your story this way because no one with filters will see it. This is not clop. Do not saddle it with the wrong rating.

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This^
I have a Teen rated story where Celestia is clopping in the shower and I've seen quite a few stories that push the evelope further than this.
Anyway, a great read as always. I particularly like your "hey even cartoon characters get down" humor. The joke delivery is flawless and never forced. I'll be looking forward to future stories. But in the meantime, I'll be re-reading what you already have out. They're that good.

Hoyden braced himself, then thought better of it and quickly finished his oats, then braced himself again. If he was going to the sun, it was going to be on a full stomach. Yeah, that's about as far as I can get before I have to take a laugh-my-ass-off break.

And if that doesn't work, then name it after me! And here is where I lose it for the second time.

I'm with ^^ those two, this could stand to lose the mature tag.

I'm really not much for clop (nothing moral, I'm just not getting very aroused) but I cannot resist sex humor like this. Because it can be so frustrating and embarrassing and engrossing, smut is simply a great source of comedy. I read this fic first over at FF.net and I love it!

I'm surprised I haven't literally died from laughing yet. :rainbowlaugh:

What are you so sorry about? I like this! :rainbowkiss:

With a little more work think you could've gotten this down a rating and just made the innuendo more over the top and possibly had a bit funnier work. Still this was a hilarious side story. Very enjoyable. Favorited.

You are forgiven. I can't stop giggling like an idiot :rainbowlaugh:

Have you been watching Red Dwarf? Only...

"Remember the whipped cream?" Whipped Cream?

I think there was something else but back-checking fails me there.

This is probably the thing related to Progress that I enjoyed most. It's definitely one of the funniest fics I've ever read.

Damn, I never knew that all these comedies I read and liked all that time ago were all done by the same guy. This is like the best day ever.

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I felt it safe to assume that at some point in their relationship Sundance and Hoyden have experimented with whipped cream.

Sexually.

If you know what I mean...

955008 Hence my reference.

As to the other analogy, it's that bit about Big Macintosh. It's practically screaming "What a guy.":raritywink:

Awwwh that's so cute :twilightblush:
It's great to see a quality romance fic that does not dissolve into a full blown clopfic :scootangel:
:moustache:Keep up the good work :rainbowdetermined2:

Haven't read yet but I'm sure I'll be laughing in a few minutes

ok, seconds, lol

...

Why are you apologizing...? :rainbowwild:

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