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Friendly Uncle


I like ponies.

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Twilight and Princess Celestia are in love. That's great... isn't it? But as they begin to tell their friends and family, how do they reconcile their relationship with the vast gulf in their experiences and the distance that an immortal alicorn princess must keep between herself and her subjects? Maybe this was a bad idea after all. Maybe their friends will just make things worse. Particularly since some of their friends are having their own relationship problems. And a secret society of masked ponies with their eye on Celestia's throne are looking to make the whole question irrelevant.

The followup to Correspondence and including the events of Moonshy. Includes pony makeouts, breakups, hookups, crying, flirting, melodramatic plots, political intrigue, OCs, and the occasional magical beatdown. I regret nothing.

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Hm...commence read.

Sorry can't read now, still reading Past Sins. Faved to read asap. Thanks for new story. Will edit comment later to say something useful.
For now sorry. :pinkiehappy:

Late edit:
2 Lines in story is good.
Expecting something to happen in next chapter.
Okay, I honestly have no idea what happens next.
So far story is interesting and promising.

Sad Twilestia? Sounds good to me. I'm reading this as soon as I finish "Secrets and Lies".

Friendly Uncle storreh! :rainbowkiss:

A new Friendly Uncle story!? Screw life, this takes priority.

inb4 featured!

... Hmmm. Not sure how to feel about all of this, actually.

You had an interesting premise with the whole "Twilight and Celestia coming out" hook, but then suddenly! high fantasy intrudes upon the plot. Seems a little... scizophrenic. Also, this looks like this needs an adventure tag.

Its not poorly written at all, just... not what was advertised, ya know?

Oh well. Will continue to watch this like a hawk to see where it goes. The start is attention getting if nothing else.

Alright... let me collect my thoughts about this... 1) You've made me annoyed at Rarity and Spike, everypony is entitled to privacy, and jumping to conclusions is a bad thing... like apparently thinking Celestia is one of the three bastardizations of her character (which I know you aren't make her that).

2) The Secret Society of Secret Secrecy... damn if I'm not wrong then it's not just forcing Celestia off the Helianthus Throne and clamming it for themselves... they want something far more potent than a throne. They want Celestia's greatest burden.

I will have to keep an eye on this.

In the Name of Her Serene Majesty Celestia Everfree,
Celestia's Paladin: Ex Solis et Lunae, Provendtia et Prospartia

PS: Epona and Gaea... you're the guy who did Correspondence...

I am so reading this later

Twilestia is Bestia

Hmm... lack of comedy tag makes me iffy.

Awesome! Keep it coming! The dialogue between Rarity and Spike was hilarious, and I'm super curious to see what happened between Twilight and Celestia.

Please keep writing, I'll keep reading!

Oh dear, this is going to go wrong quickly isn't it? :facehoof:

well they lost their chance to take out Celestia personally thanks to Twilestia ship saving the day.

dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/lolface_Queen_Chrysalis.png I'm A Gonna Join this one!

Hmmm.... After the light-heartedly tender (and often hilarious) moments of 'Correspondence', I find myself torn to read this. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_unsuresweetie_flip.png

On the one hand.... Hoof? Oh whatever! :facehoof: The sequel to such a great little Twiliestia fic like 'Correspondence' will undoubtably be well written, in character, and a good read all round.

And on the other.... 'appendage'. I can't help but notice that sad tag.... And that's a complete about face from it's predecessor. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_TwilightWut.png

dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire_dayum.png Oh well, nothing ventured nothing gained.... Allons-y! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl_Scratch.png

Twilestia? Check. 4000+ words in the first chapter? Check. Good reviews and thumbs? Check. Initiate read sequence in 3... 2... 1...

Spike.... Rarity..... :facehoof: WHY....?

You both had no right to see that picture. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl_shock.png

Breakups... dunno if want.

gets to ending of first chapter....
cue dramatic music...
DUN DUN DUUUUUUNNNNN!!!!!

Ugh... I can't even think of anything to say about this story here :twilightblush:

I'll just fav and see where this goes

well this is going places :twilightsmile:

*pulls up chair and popcorn

When Rarity tells Twilight that it was all an accident, Twilight's eyebrows will pierce the heavens! :trixieshiftright:

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Your #2 reminds me of the fic where Trixie begs/borrows/steals a magic staff and takes over the throne of Equestria. How did Celestia and Luna respond? "Huzaa! Vacation! You want it? You got it! Sucker!" Then Twilight promptly went to go beat up Trixie and told Celestia to "get off of her sexy sexy flank and go back to work ruling Equestria" :rainbowlaugh:

Oh yea ..

and we came to a satisfactory resolution.

Oh YES! Sloppy make outs are definitely a most satisfactory resolution. :twilightsmile:

bonus feature ... Celestia invents Sexting ! :trollestia:

1463368 Look who's talking Mr. FlutterDash, not to mention ScratchTavia (Consider they have 0 canon development, so you're essential shipping OCs.). So why don't you simply go home to your little church and cry about what a pathetic excuse of a writer you are. I may most-to-all forms of shipping, but what you do is beyond disgusting, at least THIS was written better than any and ALL of your fics combined. Learn to write you twat before you start being critical of others. Like honestly, you are the worst kind of brony, one with his head shoved so far up his self congratulating arse it damn near creates a time paradox
P.S You need antibiotic for a bacterial infection, not a viral infection. Retard.
P.S.S To the writer, cheers. Hope you continue

I am glad to see you writing more.

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I will ignore half of that... but I see your connections

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sorry bout that i was not Trying to be offensive but it happens sometimes :derpytongue2:

1465058 Big man can throw some words on a screen, I'm shaking in my boots. Nice try with the whole "I have a disorder herp derp" thing to try to cover how pathetic you are. You take ponies that have had 0 screen time with each other, and ship them. You're shipping OCs, and you honestly want me to believe it's more believable than shipping 2 characters that actually have a connection? Ya no, Fuck you. Also I'm German, you don't have an excuse. Now then you little twat, I find it ironic someone that ships lesbian, considers themselves strongly religious, talk about a flip flop. Now then you want to keep arguing, we'll take it on Hotmail/Skype/IRC/Something and settle this like men. Have a fuck you day.

Assasination plot... :facehoof: Can't say I saw that coming. Also, picture in the scroll? :rainbowlaugh::rainbowwild:

“Looks like a photograph.”

As soon as I saw that, I had to stop reading for a few minutes. I knew what it was going to be, and I just couldn't stop laughing at what was about to happen. Thanks for that. :twilightsmile:

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Please don't rant on each other in such a place where love and tolerance are the most important things. :fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:

Bronydragon:moustache:

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Note taken. :twilightsmile:
But please keep it at bay. :fluttershysad:
OK?:fluttercry:

Bronydragon:moustache:

1465481 Blah Blah Blah, plays Disorder thing, you're just an attention whore who can't write for shit.1465809 Have you ever seen this guy? You say anything to remotly piss him off and he goes off like a F-Bomb dropping internet version of the Hulk.

A sequel to one of the first Twilestia fics I ever read, containing even more Twilestia, as well as her friends perhaps not being entirely happy for her for once, along with a plot under way by a secret society to kill Celestia?

Tracking this so hard that it hurts.

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Have you ever seen this guy? You say anything to remotly piss him off and he goes off like a F-Bomb dropping internet version of the Hulk.

Blah Blah Blah, plays Disorder thing, you're just an attention whore who can't write for shit.

Have you seen yourself? Stop putting people down and if you don't like it tough. all he did was post a picture which can be easily dismissed and you as a result go off at him.
If you are so high and mighty why are you attacking him.

No more hate please!
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You've set the stage for a very interesting story here. I could easily see this going for tens of thousands of words, depending on how you decide to handle the reactions of Twi's friends and the assassination (?) conspiracy. Romance spiced with comedy, drama, and political intrigue? I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter! :twilightsmile:

I must defend my Celestia!

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Would argue, but past experience says that trying to prove people who post gifs/images wrong never goes well. Also, busy intentionally spacing out for no real reason other than it feels funny.

Ship wars are never fun, anyway.

See that picture? Notice that you can't see Twilight's horn? *waggles eyebrows*

The followup to Correspondence and including the events of Moonshy. Includes pony makeouts, breakups, hookups, crying, flirting, melodramatic plots, political intrigue, OCs, and the occasional magical beatdown. I regret nothing.

What about the fact the the cover art looks like Celestia is giving Twilight a hornjob?

Going up against Celestia? Possible, but perhaps unwise. I've had OCs who've done it, no, nothing published, do I LOOK like i'm a good writer, but they/he/it has had a few billion years to plan things along for Celestia to be born and is quite happy with just the occassional subtle manipulation of he life and, sometimes, mocking her to get hr angry. ...Interestingly, said OC is murderously, literally, protective of Twilight Sparkle, and has begun motions to get the two dating. It's not part of his overall PLAN for the universe, but it'll make Twilight Sparkle happy, he owes her, and that's the important thing. How does a being from the dawn of existence owe Twilight Sparkle anything? Now that's where it all gets interesting.

Hey, everyone else typed out a lot of stuff, why can't I ramble? But, faved and following this, just like the prequel. Rarity? Seriously. If Celestia sent Twilight a picture of her cutie mark and plot, then, I think the two are doing good relationship wise. ...And I predict Twilight freaking about anyone seeing one of the private scrolls, particularly one with a picture. Particularly if it was one of her friends. Yeah, Twilight's going to freak out. Again.

Why overthrow the Princess?

These guys have got no imagination. Wrap her up in a cage of paper and then do what you want whilst feeding her lies.

Pull it off, and she'll never even know...:trixieshiftright:

1465983
Just a risky thought. Don't say anything that pisses him off.
He has his own mind with things an so have you. There is no need to make a word war over it.
Moreover there is a technic that helps with situations like this. It's called ignorance.
When you see something you don't like just ignore it. And if the urge is too strong just POLITELY ask him/her to please stop posting things you don't like, because this site is about a show, that tries to show of love and tolerance.

Bronydragon:moustache:

1466500 Sorry, none of that Love and Tolerance crap works, go try it in real life....See? There will always be hate, and Brony in fighting will always exist, we're only human after all. 1467671 I would try the polite route but have you seen what this twat does to it? He can't take ANY friggin critiques and immediately tells the person providing said critique to "Fuck off and go to hell" and then proceeds to claim that his "fics are great". I'm just trying to put an egotistical dumbass of a "brony" in his place.

My Little Pony: Sexting is Magic

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Please don't flame each other in the comments. You're welcome and encouraged to say anything you like about the story, but if you're going to argue amongst yourselves I'd prefer you to take it to private messaging.

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Thank you.

1463368 I must agree. Lesbian romance fics are pretty much the only thing that ever make the hitbox.

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>It's like a twelve-year-old peasant falling in love with the King of England
>It's like a twelve-year-old peasant
>Twelve-year-old

You know,that comparison would be correct,if it wasn't because of that little bit.Last time I checked,all of the main six are young adults,perfectly capable to work and live on their own.

Not sure if want.
I always thought Correspondence was pretty good as a self-contained work.

1468483 That's not his point, all he does is write lesbian shipfics.

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