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Liquid_Rainbows


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#1 · Jan 1st, 2012 · · ·

hahahaha.... i have actually been waiting for a fic exactly like this where celestia gets with one of her guards... the only thing i demand is MOAR!:pinkiehappy:. in fact how meany young colts has she had?:trollestia:

Simple, clop-tastic naughtiness. A prime example of the genre; just a few spelling/grammar mistakes here or there, but too few to detract from the...er...story?

Anyway, very nicely done.

#4 · Jan 1st, 2012 · · ·

@Soviet Brony: She might use magic to prevent that you know.

Great story but I must point out grammatical errors. Threw should be through. And you tend to get the letters S and D mixed up a lot, but I could still tell what you were trying to say

Whether it be sad, grimdark, sexy, or actually intentionally comedic, no fanfiction so far has failed to leave me laughing my flank off... This is nice.

Hmm very good. Got my 5 stars

As soon as I saw this was by Liquid_Rainbows, I had to read it. As before, you did a great job with this.:yay:

5 stars all the way

Ice

Amazing story but you made an error or two

You misspelled day "The say passed on as normal, all the way up till dinner."

Good read besides that.

Alright. Going back through, I hope I got rid of most of the remaining errors.

Also, I love all of you so much! Every single one of you, I mean it! I don't know how long the five star rating will last, but the fact that it even hit that is astounding. I'm really glad people are liking the story! :pinkiehappy:

100822

Rating is overrated (lol xD ) since some people just 1 star things they dont like (like having a dark tag and such),so will probably happen here too.

Great one anyway,really enjoyed reading it.:trollestia:

100822

Also CONGRATS ON getting it in the featured section (the scrolling stories at the top :pinkiehappy: )

Having my name there makes me feel all proud now :rainbowlaugh:

100836
Yeah I just noticed that! Pretty exciting, since I've only had this account for three days! :rainbowkiss:

#17 · Jan 1st, 2012 · · ·

AND THUS THE BOY BECAME A MAN.

Nice Liquid!

I love it! and I have the most obvious boner :moustache:

100957
indeed my good sir.:moustache:

5 stars

101010

I would have Lol'd if I haven't read that on a Vitamin Water bottle

101030

Always

damn this touchscreen...

#26 · Jan 1st, 2012 · · ·

Dawww the shy guy finally gets his due.
:twilightsmile:
I enjoyed this story.

i don't usually read clopfics...... damn it, fine. i'll read it.

'Mature' tag... BUCK THAT! I'ma gonna read this, (Probably regret it, due to my tenancy towards not reading clop-fics), but I'm gonna read this, and I'm going to try to like it, if only because of Princess Molestia! ALLONS-Y! *Goes to read the fic*

~ Moonstone, Minstrel of Equestria

You have to get rid of one word for the sake of ocd.

101239
You have been warned. :pinkiecrazy:

Okay... Not bad, though I hope you aren't insulted if I say that I skipped the clop scene. I just... Don't read that stuff. Everything else I read was pretty good though! I might check your profile to see if you've written anything else. Keep writing, and you should keep getting even better!

~ Moonstone, Minstrel of Equestria

A disgusting idea- Granny Smith and Applebloom. And old mare and an inexperienced filly. That would be interesting. To me, at least.

101246
It's a funny thing, I don't like reading many clopfics all that much myself. :derpyderp2:

And no, I'm not insulted. I'm glad you actually gave it a shot! :yay:

101315
Fixed that as fast as I could! :twilightsheepish:

And believe him they did not
So where were you yesterday
Oh you know just HAVING SEX WITH CELESTIA
That's it every guard has had a few rounds with her, why do you think we're so loyal
themavesite.com/TMS-Pictures/Epic/Memes/BadPokerFace.png

LOL the detail in this is good, nice job! :yay:

I ligitly read this for the plot... Not "plot" I mean PLOT... Clop fics just don't get to me XD Good story anyway XD

101010

There's a difference between having the entire word there and

splng ery wrd lik dis

Cute and entertaining, good show.

<insert obligatory not bad meme face here.>
I rather enjoyed this piece. Good work.

#42 · Jan 2nd, 2012 · · ·

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha





porn

.......... not bad....... not bad at all. now please excuse me while i do something(not entirley sure what) that will get the mental images this story conjured out of my head. while it was a good story, i happen to visualize every fanfic i read that has a male main character in a first person point of view.... and i do not want to see myself banging Celestia when i go to sleep tonight.

#44 · Jan 2nd, 2012 · · ·

Read it, loved it, clopped a bit.

In the words of the Romans, Vidi, Vici, Veni. I Saw, I Conquered, I Came

That came out wrong.....

And then the instructor walks over and says that he got there first.

D'aw. Love me some Molestia...

... H-Hey wait!! I'm meek and shy too! Wait! Please! WAIT FOR MEEEEEEE!

Ego equus pugnavi

Translation? I clop ponies.

AWWWWWWWWW YEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAA!
Celestia's gonna make a COLT outta you!:trollestia:

#49 · Jan 2nd, 2012 · · ·

Anime nose bleed powers activate

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