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When a magical spell goes awry, Applejack and Rarity find themselves leading each others lives. Can the drama queen handle farm life? Can the laidback farmpony handle the pressure of retail? Only time will tell!
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Ooh! A body/life swap fic!
I've been tossing that title around for months and it's just too perfect
1789771 I was JUST gonna do a body swap w/ Octy and Vinyl! MY LIEF IZ RUIND
1789879But Octavia and Vinyl aren't even in this so why can't you? o.o
1789907 I don't wanna look like a copier....
You're not a copier, friend. If people didn't write stories because they resembled something else than nobody would ever write stories anymore. And Hollywood would have been out of business decades ago. Go! Go and write! And may the odds be ever in your favor.
I enjoy body switch fics, and you did a great job with this one. Nice grammar, and over all a great read. Can't wait for more.
Just a tip, you don't have to separate key points with a different chapter, like what you did with chapters 1-3. You can simply use '---' or use a page break, any will work though.
And also;
Typo or a secret foreshadowing?
1789943 1. Thats just how I write. *See my other story I did yesterday*
2. CRAP! *goes to fix*
Even though there is plenty of swap fics out there, I can't get enough of them.
:)
I graduated from college yesterday so haven't gotten a chance to start writing again. It's coming! I promise!
Lul'd.
Story has a nice flow, I gotta say. Even for it's shortness.
1831065 I'm not a very good writer so I only write short stories.
My stories are meant to read like an episode.
>Silly introduction
>Introduction of Problem
>Problem gets worse
>Problem fixed
>Epilogue
If I can make at least one person laugh, my story is considered successful.
I have added a bit of new material to close out Zecora's part. I initially intended her to have a much bigger part and her role was left blindingly untouched as, admittedly, I completely forgot I had introduced a story arc that was never used. As the story progressed and I forgot to finish her role properly, that has been fixed and the plot point has been addressed.
I got a little confused at who was who because the IDs switched but still managed. You do a good enough job with AJ's accent to still tell who is who. The quickie episode feel is a plus.
This has got to be the most random and awkward place ever for Rarimac shipping.
4452397 Good lord this story is so old though I was terrible at writing stories back then
Cute story, ended a little too quick but doable. When I heard Sweetie was going to work on the dress I thought it seemed OoC until it all humorously went wrong.
Pinkie went to band camp, oh boy.
1842067
I thought it was weird she was set up and then Twilight randomly solved the problem from the other side of town. You did a good job writing her though, can't imagine all those rhymes are easy to think up.
This story has been around for almost two years, and no one other than the author has commented on the title?
What has my dad's obsession with old television shows done to me?
I now have no choice but to leave you with this:
Nice job. I think this story was very well written.
5915090 Holy crap this was like... my second story ever. It's TERRIBLE.
5916778 If this is terrible I have got to read some more of your stories. I liked it.
5917165 I got a lot better with the newer ones.
5917201 Ok If anyone needs me
Tough luck I'm reading!
Hello! I did a reading of your story. I hope you enjoy it! https://m.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLx33b6yjUU5c8ehfhsKv5NgimsJffwpi5