Twilight goes onto the adventure with two other friends. they go underwater to a place never seen before. They discover a new type of pony that lives underwater. How did they get there in the first place?
Takes place before "Magical Mystery Cure"
Written with Emmo13
Edited by Nonagon
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Should have a question mark. And, if you didn't write this, you cannot post it. I would suggest taking it down and letting that guy/girl post it. It is against the rules to post stories that you did not write.
-Sonic
..... Wut?
1764079 I helped write it I written chapter 1 and parts of 2
1764108 My bad. I read the summary wrong. Oops.
Alt. Title: The Seven Seaponies Of Rhye: Even More References To Previous Generations
1784113 Funny I was just posting a new chapter when you commented
1784113 I am never using that. the title was already decided
this has potential...ONWARDS TO THE NEXT CHAPTER
1940083 Well thanks for reading
Seapony Lyra? Not the weirdest Lyra I've read.
2010593 its a internet meme. look it up
This story has been reviewed by TECS
Story Title: The Seaponies
Author: Opuscon789
Reviewed by: Hope
Short form:
A story by a relatively new author, “The Seaponies” is built on a decent concept, but has some significant problems. It has a bit of romance and some surprises in store for a reader who keeps reading until the end. I enjoyed the read mostly because of the ending, but I think that the author could do with putting a lot more time and effort into the scenery and characters.
Score: 3/10
Full Review Here
I like the story but you move way to fast in this first chapter and your way of writing is very dry. This doesn't read well as a story, try using more imagery and see if you can make it a little less robotic.
Oh, come on! I was hoping the romance was going to be in between the Sea Pony that studied her! She even called Twilight beautiful!
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