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opuscon789


I like to write a lot supernatural and Rainbow Dash stories so expect me to do that

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Diamond Tiara was a very selfish pony and not caring for other ponies. On Heartwarming she goes on the journey of a lifetime. she goes to the past, present, and future and learns that its bad to not care then care for others.

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For the ones that are going to criticise me for writing this I want you to know that I tried my best and I took this story thew spell checks and reviewer. even though I tried my best I will still write no matter what you say.

Just so you know, the holiday the ponies celebrate is called "Hearth's Warming." You may want to fix that in the story, though I think "A Heartwarming Carol" is still a cute title for the story.

Dang, stole my idea! Still like it, though...I was gonna write this with Rarity...:facehoof:

Still, very nice!:raritywink:

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I don't think I did this time
I think I won

1726861 diomond tiara! love itt! glad to see you took my sugestion! i'll read it now!
dtlux1

I like this so far, I only saw 2 mistakes

Dear Princess Celestia
We have a problem her and we need your help. Diamond Tiara does not understand the true meaning of Christmas and Pinkie, Rainbow and I don't have any suggestions. If you have any suggestions we will take them. Thanks
Your faithful student
Twilight Sparkle

here, not her

Diamond slowly moved in and made shore that know pony’s looking.

no pony's, not know pony's, sure, not shore
I do like the story though, I also like how there are descriptions of all the ponies eventhough most people reading this know what they look like. This makes the story longer, more annoying, funny, and better. I do stuff like that to make my stories longer, like I did in Background Ponies to the Rescue, hope you like my stories.
dtlux1

Hey, so caught up in steam and typing/writing I didn't see you finished this.
dtlux1

"I like it but who are the ghost?" Pinkie asked

"You are the ghost," said Celesta

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