This story takes place in an alternate universe where everybody in the land of Equestria are human. The Cutie Mark Crusaders are again on another escapade to get there Cutie Marks, however, like always something goes wrong causing them to accidently send Twilight, Spike and Rainbow Dash to a world populated by colorful talking ponies that are strangely familiar. As the three get settled in they are taken in awe of this new world but as their stay gets prolonged they are met with disaster that can very well destroy this new world as well as their own. Join our main6 as they meet there counterparts and work together to battle this new threat.
Chapters (5)
this could be good, i will read later
The description says that I should not read this
The concept interests me, but it needs some SERIOUS proofreading.
AN ORIGINAL IDEA??
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I'm reading this later.
Pretty good, does need a proof reader, only have one real question, Why is the chapter called chapter 2?
Yeah sorry about that, turns out I forgot to publish chapters 1 and 3
. And don't worry I plan to fix the chapters next time i get the chance.
You really need to break down those walls of text. There should be a new paragraph every time a character speaks, after thy're done speaking, and every time the topic is changed.
good story.