• Member Since 15th Sep, 2012
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RapeTrain-Express


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I got the weirdest boner right now...:applejackconfused:

1 view 8 dislikes and 5 likes?

What is this...i dont even

Congratulations. I now will feel like a dick is in my mouth when I brush my teeth.:pinkiesick:

Obligatory for all dentist stories ever concieved!

So THAT'S where she got all that money from!! :yay:

:rainbowderp: That...was...interesting.

...[img]file:///Users/Angela/Desktop/522303_489966987714963_762119715_n.jpg[/img]
hopefullly this isn't an image fail.:rainbowhuh:

Why are all the good stories of Trixie are ways where she gets humiliated?

Why u rape best pony? :fluttercry::pinkiesad2::applecry:

I don't get why like 90% of Trixie stories are rape.
In fact, I don't get why any stories are rape, so whatever.

Pony rape.. um... ok, I'm not sure how I should actually react, but first, I need to take care of my shameful mega-boner. Pardon me. :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy: :trollestia:

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Because people seem to get off on the idea of a stuck up bitch being put in her place.

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She's not even a "stuck up bitch" anymore, after the ending of yesterday's episode. I didn't really think she was a "stuck up bitch" in the first place though.

Besides rape isn't really "putting someone in their place".

Tooth brushing fetish? I never knew it could happen.

First time I've ever seen a trixie and colgate fic.:rainbowhuh:

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He rapes her because she is best pony.

Toothbrushing just got so much more erotic!

Not bad. Your story had almost to no errors in it and somehow put an odd taste in my mouth. I don't think I'll look at a toothbrush the same way again.

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You're not alone in this my friend! :pinkiesick:

1727479 1727854 And that's a bad thing?

Great story overall but in the beginning it said front tooth chipped off which means the whole front tooth fell off then later it said her chipped tooth so I'm kinda confused but great over all
P.s. maybe you can read my story my day in ponyville

1727554 Kindness is it's Own Reward?
Okay, I'll let you live for not having read that fic
for now . . .
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1727458 Yup. The premise itself is WTF enough to make people voice opinions without reading.

Saw the chapter title and I thought of this.

There is no "sex" tag.
Am I the only one wondering why there's no sex tag when he says there's a sex tag?
Hmm?

Never change, RapeTrain-Express. :pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh:

I love the Fancy pants flashback :rainbowlaugh:

1727814 You, sir, need to reevaluate your definition of errors.

So many grammatical issues strewn throughout the fic with missing words, extra words, and other various things that I don't feel like specifically pointing out. I liked the concept, Trixie paying for her tooth renewal with a bit of brown-chicken-brown-cow, so I'll give you props for that and the fact that I haven't seen a TrOlgate fic before, but you really could use an editor. Check out the various groups set up for pre-readers/editors and try to find one to help with this.

Won't rate it either way as the idea is good, but the execution was sub-par. Instead, I'll give you a :twilightsmile:

1111 views, WOAAAARP

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I get the strangest feeling that good old Uncle Curio... is weird. :trixieshiftright:

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That's all right I have a clerics ring. :pinkiesmile:

My life is now complete. Tooth brushing fetish for the win.

Is it wrong that I want this to happen to me?

Except for the broken tooth part. I've cracked my teeth before and don't want to lose them completely.

I thought i've seen everything but... this is taking it to the next step

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